Monday
May 14, 2001
* Skip the rest
I think after two of your stories ["Bahram",
"Dariush"]
I will respectfully omit the next eleven. The first one presented novelty
and a hint of shock, but the second one, for me at least, collapsed into
the common malaise of stories of this type: it takes itself too seriously
and masks the lack of a story with intellectual rap, sentimental choke and
sexual hype.
In cultures like ours, it is often common to escape from meaning to emphasis
on form and protocol. Therefore it becomes the point of a story to break
from protocol or tradition through the use of sex, language, and other devices
instead of focusing on the conflict or a meaning behind relations that they
represent.
I don't mean your story should have a message per se, but it would be
nice if it has something heavier to say instead of bringing the words to
a dance for the circus effect.
I hope you dont mind pointing these out, but here I think are two examples
of how stories with sexual/relationship angle can be done better:
//www.nerve.com/Fiction/Cosper/keepingCount/
//www.iran-emrooz.de/farhang/mirafta0124.html
Ramin Tabib
* Irani sense of humor
Sharp! ["Bahram's
cousin"] Nice way of showing that good old down-to-earth Irani
sense of humour and safaa rules over the Westernized, overly-romaticized
melodrama. I really enjoyed the first piece "Bahram"
as well and plan to read them both again soon; but "Bahram's
cousin" keenly put the first piece "Bahram"
into perspective.
Kasra. A. Ebrahimi
* Closer to reality
Very humorous story ["Bahram's
cousin"]. In fact your story is closer to reality than "Bahram"
by Nooneh.
Farzad Farahani
* Back to beloved Tehran
I found a link to one of your stories in The Iranian ["Sedaa-ye
koocheh"]. It was very nice, and simple, and that made me to read
all your stories in that
site. I really enjoyed all of them.
I just want to say thanks to you to take me home. It is about nine months
that I have left Iran, and your nice stories took me back to my beloved
city, Tehran. I really found myself in Tehran during these two hours that
I was reading your stories. Thank you very much.
Reza Omrani
* Those little things
Dearest Sadaf, I have read your last piece ["Sedaa-ye
koocheh"]. It was great as usual. I am proud of you! Your writings
give me the things that I really missed about Iran! Those little things
that most of the people don't pay any attention to and you feel them with
your heart and soul! KEEP IT UP!
Sally
* Mossadegh: Enough praise
See my comments
in Persian about "Don't
call me 'Sir'".
Cyrous Moradi
* They've heard that song
I'd like to offer some final thoughts on the many supportive comments
made by The Iranian's readership regarding my views ["Look in the
mirror"], as well as John Mohammadi's rebuttal ["Common standards
of moraliy"].
Much can be extrapolated from my own and John's original pieces ["Ghost of
Khobar"], and for clarification I think it's appropriate to reintroduce
some of the elements that I thought were central to both--in order to illustrate
exactly how much we agree rather than disagree. Bearing in mind that the
essence of my argument was that in the U.S. today it is extremely difficult
to get policy makers and political interests to focus and act on "the
facts" regarding to U.S.-Iranian relations, I'd like to briefly make
the following two points:
First, the principal group that I had in mind when I brought up the issue
of powerful political interests in Washington that are opposed to the normalization
of U.S.-Iranian relations is far more central to American politics than
the MKO, Californian pistachio growers, Pakistani rug weavers, or even the
Zionist or pro-Israeli lobby groups. We are talking, quite simply, about
the hardline leadership of the Republican Party in Congress, and in particular,
the House of Representatives: Tom DeLay, Benjamin Gilman, and Dick Armey
(just to name a few) >>>
FULL TEXT
Bahram Rajaee
* Speculation no substitute
Mr. Rajaee, thanks for your kind and cordial comments, I found the discussion
to be quite enlightening ["They've
heard that song"]. I hope I didn't cause you any offense, but I
think you again misconstrued the point of bringing up Israel's misdeeds.
I did not "raise the issue of Israeli transgressions in order to make
any headway in rehabilitating Iran." Indeed, I have no intention to
rehabilitate anyone and couldn't even if I wanted to because I have no special
knowledge of the facts or the evidence. It was simply to point out that
a historic event known as the Lavon Affair acts as a precedent to support
a hypothetical scenario of Israeli involvement in the Khobar bombing.
The point is that speculation should not substitute for analysis, but
if speculation is all we have, then it should apply evenly to all the potential
culprits. Now, whether the politicians will find this arguement convincing
or not, I agree that they probably won't. And you know what? I don't care!
To paraphrase Nelson Mandela, they can all go jump in a lake. In a democracy
people have a duty to express their opinions about the policies of their
government especially if the powerful find it distastefull, and maybe if
enough people speak up, they'll listen >>>
FULL TEXT
John Mohammadi
* Scapegoat
In the recent flap over allegations of Iranian involvement in the Khobar
bombing, Louis Freeh is being portrayed as a patriot fighting for truth
and justice in the face of obstruction of justice by self-serving politicians
["Ghost
of Khobar", "Look
in the mirror"]. Freeh supposedly believes that he has evidence
sufficient to indict Iranians and yet he chose to wait for a change in administrations
to get a more favorable result. In my opinion, it is highly unethical to
sit on evidence. If there has been obstruction of justice, would this not
fit the description? Is he looking for justice for the victims or revenge,
or even worse, a scapegoat?
What kind of civil servant makes decisions about justice based on politics?
The courts should decide the validity of Freeh's evidence. Justice is not
a political decision. If a grand jury determines that indictments should
be handed down then it should be so. In the mean time there is no usefulness
in spreading rumors, except for self-serving political reasons >>> FULL
TEXT
Bradley Hernlem, Ph.D.
* DARING to criticize Israel
I found it very interesting that Mr. Bakhtiar would try so hard to defend
his beloved Israel ["Did
Tel Aviv pay Salman Rushdie, too?"] in response to John Mohammadi's
excellent piece on the Khobar case ["Ghost
of Khobar"]. Did we offend your Jewish sensibilities Mr. Bakhtiar?
You must forgive us for DARING to criticize Israel in any way, shape, or
form, or to even remotely suggest that Israel is even remotely capable of
anything barbaric, destructive, or terroristic.
It's time to take the gloves off.
For 20 years now, Israel and politically active Jews worldwide (but especially
in the United States) have gone to extraordinary lengths to villify, isolate,
and malign Iran and Iranians. US sanctions against Iran were single-handedly
the work of Edgar Bronfman (president of "World Jewish Congress"),
who in 1995 called then President Bill Clinton and demanded that the United
States take action to prevent Conoco from proceeding with an oil exploration
contract they had signed with Iran >>>
FULL TEXT
Nariman Neyshapouri
* Ahura Mazda keep you well
Nima, I read The Iranian from time to time, make a few comments
here and there, when I see someone (unintentionally) has not understood
the simple tenants of my old Iranian faith, long forgotten now in its birthplace.
I take rejoice in reading about heroes like your dad ["Into the horizon"],
to me they remind me of the numerous old people I have met who had made
the arduous journey by foot in the early 30's from Iran to a safe harbor
in Pakistan, finally giving up the land, as all was taken from them but
their dignity, persecuted only because of their conscience, as they refused
to be converted from our Zarthushti faith, but like your father, warriors
they still are, there spirits unbroken, what admirable courage they and
your father emanate!
I marvel at the stuff they are made off. Some day Nima, as we say, this
scrooge over Iran will go away, Ahriman will be defeated, "man ano
awayad shudan" as we recite these words three times in one of our pazand
prayers.
Long life to you and your family, may Ahura Mazda keep you well.
Feroz Dinshah
* The promised one
Dear Mr. Entesari ["Bahais
easily separate national ties"],
The Bahai new year is called Eid Rezvan nad it is in April and not March.
Bahais have a 19-day fasting period that ends on March 21st of each year,
therefore they celebrate the ending of their fast on that day which coincides
with the day of Noruz or the day after.
As for the temple of the Bahais, there is one on every continent and
there are Bahais in every locality on the face of the planet. In fact the
Bahai faith is the most widespread religion in the world.
The Bahai ARC and world center is in Haifa, Israel on Mount Carmel and
not in Jeruselam. The establishment of such ARC is the fulfillment of promises
made in the Bible as well as Qoran.
As for why the Bahais refer to Iran as holy, it's because God chose Iran
to fulfill the most great manifestation promised by Moses, Jesus, Mohammad
and Buddha. That promised one is Bahaullah or Glory of God.
I suggest you read some of the writings of Bahaullah. For example you
may find one of his writings, the Book of Certitude (IQAN) in a Bahai Center
in any city. I have read that book may be ten times and still cannot fully
absorb it's immense meanings.
After reading this book you too will then understand why the Bahai faith
is the fastest growing and the most wide spread religion in the world.
Amir Manavi
* That's an order
Dear Yariz,
I admire your courage to take the time to share your views with the intention
of helping the rest of us in this era of apathy and indifference ["Embrace"].
The more I looked through your letter to find more praise for you the less
I found. Your recommendation of "stop brainwashing your children by
telling them they are iranians" hurt me to the core. Denial of truth
is a sign of sickness, be it from an individual or a nation. Although I
could answer you better if I knew your gender, your age and your background,
but I will take a shot at it anyway.
You strike me as a person who is far younger than the number of years
I have been in America. I suffered from such illusions a very little when
I was in my twenties. In that case, I hope you have an open mind and consider
my comments as constructive criticism. I am writing this in the spirit of
helping you to do your homework better and avoid hasty conclusions before
writing and passing judgement on anyone or any nation. You also strike me
as a person descending from some of our Persian poets or writers who unconditionally
praised the kings, thus promoting corruption >>>
FULL TEXT
Ali Parsa
* About love
"Homosexuality is not about what you do in bed, it is about whom
you fall in love with."
I was once a homophobe. I had learned to hate and to abhor gays and lesbians.
I was taught to believe that they were sick, not normal, and that what they
did was not naturalBut that was a long time ago. Before I fell in love with
a woman. Before I realized I was a lesbian.
Oh, she wasn't the first woman I had fallen in love with. But it was
the first time I was conscious about it. The first time I didn't deny my
feelings. And loving her was the most "natural" thing for me to
do.
Being a lesbian, and accepting my homosexuality definitely made me a
better person. It made me think how much most of our beliefs are based on
our ignorance, lack of knowledge, superstition, etc. It made me more accepting
of other people's differences. It made me more tolerant.
If I hadn't fallen in love, maybe I would still be a homophobe today.
I'm thankful to God for making me capable of love. I'm thankful to God for
making me a lesbian.
incognitus
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