کبوتر با کبوتر , باز با باز
شود شعرم اینگونه آغاز
کبوتر مهربونه , سفیده
نشانی از وفا , از صلحه
از باز من اکنون اطلاع زیادی ندارم
چگونه دنبالِ شکار است , من ندانم
همی دانم سخت مشغولِ کار است
از کبوتر می نویسند داستانها
چه شعرهایی در وجهش می سرایند
بگویند بس از سفیدی , از پروازها
پس اینگونه شعرم را می دهم پایان
نخواهم بدانم من بسیار از باز
تنها کبوتر را می دهم امروز پرواز
آناهید حجتی
Recently by Anahid Hojjati | Comments | Date |
---|---|---|
This is how it happened | - | Jul 24, 2012 |
یک نهر در شهر | 1 | Jul 23, 2012 |
Legendary Patience | 2 | Jul 18, 2012 |
Person | About | Day |
---|---|---|
نسرین ستوده: زندانی روز | Dec 04 | |
Saeed Malekpour: Prisoner of the day | Lawyer says death sentence suspended | Dec 03 |
Majid Tavakoli: Prisoner of the day | Iterview with mother | Dec 02 |
احسان نراقی: جامعه شناس و نویسنده ۱۳۰۵-۱۳۹۱ | Dec 02 | |
Nasrin Sotoudeh: Prisoner of the day | 46 days on hunger strike | Dec 01 |
Nasrin Sotoudeh: Graffiti | In Barcelona | Nov 30 |
گوهر عشقی: مادر ستار بهشتی | Nov 30 | |
Abdollah Momeni: Prisoner of the day | Activist denied leave and family visits for 1.5 years | Nov 30 |
محمد کلالی: یکی از حمله کنندگان به سفارت ایران در برلین | Nov 29 | |
Habibollah Golparipour: Prisoner of the day | Kurdish Activist on Death Row | Nov 28 |
Special thanks to Roozbeh Pournader, Behdad Esfahbod,
by Anahid Hojjati on Sat Dec 11, 2010 06:21 AM PSTHamid Zarrabi Zadeh, Artyom Lukanin, Danial Keshani.
This special thanks is regarding the product Zamaneh Editor. I use this Farsi Editor for almost all my blogs which are in Farsi. Last time that I used this editor, I saw that at the bottom this special thanks was given to these guys. These must be the guys who worked on the product. I wanted to thank them since before Zamaneh editor, it was much more involved for me to type in Farsi. Thanks guys.
These comments are all related to کبوتر با کبوتر
Anahid HojjatiFri Dec 10, 2010 01:11 AM PST
Souri jan, I see that in one of the comments, you wrote that you wanted to apologize to me because you got out of subject. As a matter of fact, these comments are all related to
کبوتر با کبوتر , باز با باز
Reason I write this is that is on IC, I have come to know and repect many contributors. There are several that I have had exchanges with that have been full of disagreements. Some that come to my mind are my discussions with "Azarin" over Tudeh in Azarbayejan and with "Laleh Gillani" over my poem about Islam when I was a kid. Even though in these exchanges, we had opposite views, Azarin and Laleh have written positive comments about some of my work and I have done that regarding their work. So just because we have had opposing views on certain subjects, we have not treated each other as enemies and that is what I like and kind of online presence that I want to have and engage in. Reason this has been possible with Azarin and Laleh has been that even though we have different political views, but we must have certain character traits and general life beliefs that make us close to each other and that is what I talk about when I write
کبوتر با کبوتر , باز با باز
I believe Samsam has talked about this in his comments on this thread. So my point is that the comments are actually very related to subject of poem.
Again my dear
by Souri on Fri Dec 10, 2010 06:41 AM PST*** I have to apologize to Anahid for getting out of subject of her blog, hope she will forgive me.
Yes, dear Samsam, you are right.
It's all about our intolerance.
When I wrote that blog, I had no intention of bragging about myself or my ideas. I just wanted to explain what was my reason for always defending Toudeh. Regardless of being right or wrong, or pleasing other people or not, I just wanted to be clear about my own position in that regard.
But some people, can't even tolerate that others use their rights of believing in something. Rather than coming there and confront me straight in the face, they go write a blog for belittling me. Go ask them why they did this?
I bet they don't even know the reason, themselves.
Oh, you know what? Let em be.
Some people just get stuck in their ignorance and there's nothing to do about that. I Just leave them there and move on!
Good night my dear friend.
I admire your sincerity and your sense of self responsiblity.
The good behavior of the people, warms our heart and make us thankful..... And the bad ones, just make us to recognize and appreciate the good ones!
Having said that, souri
by SamSamIIII on Thu Dec 09, 2010 08:40 PM PSTI like to add that most folks have many characteristic attributes & dimensions, some odd, some favourable to others so we cant collectively dismiss em based on only one or two that we dont fancy(unless they are anti kiaan):). I for one may not be a fan of Golestan or have zero tolerance for toudeh party yet I shall never dismiss you collectively due to my issue with one of your dimensions. I stand guilty of being judgmental myself at times in dealing with pretence and stricly fussy as to give legitimacy to idiocy yet I,m fair in face of sincerety . I think you are sincere and your friends like Anahid have matured partly because of your candidness & support.
Cheers!!!
Path of Kiaan Resurrection of True Iran Hoisting Drafshe Kaviaan //iranianidentity.blogspot.com //www.youtube.com/user/samsamsia
Samsam aziz
by Souri on Thu Dec 09, 2010 08:31 PM PSTThank you so much for this heartwarming comment. It was so unexpected! I don't know what to say.
You nailed it, Samsam jon. This is not about what is said, but mostly who said it. All this new wave of attack has started from the point that I blogged about Golestan and Toudeh. Not that they didn't like the subject, actually they are apolitic people, and don't even understand a word of it. But what bother them the most, is that some of these people have big pretension of being a writer! Nobody should beat them.
Even if this was never my intention, but unfortunately it came as a knife to open the old wounds. Otherwise, there isn't any history of struggle or fight, since an eternity now. All these made up stories are just from the jealousy and intolerance of the people.
I let it be. This too shall pass.
Again thank you so much my dear friend, for your support.
And yes you are right about Anahid. She has a very strong character.
The good behavior of the people, warms our heart and make us thankful..... And the bad ones, just make us to recognize and appreciate the good ones!
Dear SamSam, thanks for your comment addressed to...
by Anahid Hojjati on Thu Dec 09, 2010 07:33 PM PSTDear SamSam, thanks for your comment addressed to Souri and me. It was very nice of you and I am grateful that you think this way about me. I think people are generally OK. Even people from groups on IC that seem not to like me, I do like some of their work, and from time to time I have commented positively about their work. Also I do appreciate some negative comments when they have a good point or points and I get to learn from them.
Souri jan and others, I never flagged any comment on this thread
by Anahid Hojjati on Thu Dec 09, 2010 07:13 PM PSTI see that Souri jan has some comments about the fact that people should not have flagged comments on this thread. Just for information, I have not flagged anyone on this thread. I did leave a comment addressed to the person who had left the comment. I am talking about my 9:17 am comment.
Dear Souri & Anahid
by SamSamIIII on Thu Dec 09, 2010 03:22 PM PSTBoth of you are independent characters with your authentic trail of thought and hence the target of status quo conscripts. The fact that you dont limit yourselves to cliche meaningless cocoons or state your mind detached from local hysteria are the reasons for your detractions. The difference between you and them is that you challenge reality & they dont, you dont belong to a herd & they do, you practice common sense & they dont, you are original & they arent, you write to delegate a point & they do to delegate nonsense, you speak from the mind & they speak from gastric inlet and finally you are you & they are somebody's nobody. I have myself experienced this naked hatefull bias orchestrated from the top. The hate & favouritism is as such levels that they wont even acknowledge your good work based on its secularity of content but who is writing it & if he/she belongs to the circle of khodii.
I commend both of you on your independence of mind & character.
Cheers!!!
Path of Kiaan Resurrection of True Iran Hoisting Drafshe Kaviaan //iranianidentity.blogspot.com //www.youtube.com/user/samsamsia
To the persons who flagged that comment?
by Souri on Thu Dec 09, 2010 11:29 AM PSTDear friends
I asked it many times:
I know you had a good intention, thank you, but don't flag any comment to which I'd already answered.
That ridicule post by Peter Pan here, was showing exactly the lack of intelligence and the degree of the jealousy which is killing him and the rest of his gang.
So please next time when I have already addressed the case, do not flag the offensive/stupid comment, because then my reply to them will have no meaning.
Bests;
The good behavior of the people, warms our heart and make us thankful..... And the bad ones, just make us to recognize and appreciate the good ones!
To person who gets intimidated by Souri because she is smart
by Anahid Hojjati on Thu Dec 09, 2010 09:36 AM PSTYes, Souri is smart and speaks her mind. Guess what, I saw her and she is beautiful too. If you are jealous, go to another thread, here you will just get more jealous.
Do you think you feel a jealous person inside you?
by Souri on Thu Dec 09, 2010 09:21 AM PSTI don't need to google it for you !
LOOOOOL, Your comments made me laugh loud.
I loved it!
By this way of commenting everywhere about me (the me me me :)) You bring more attention to me than myself, even if I'd worked hard for it!!!
Update your tactic, it's getting too old. Doesn't work anymore :-(
The good behavior of the people, warms our heart and make us thankful..... And the bad ones, just make us to recognize and appreciate the good ones!
Souri jan, thanks for your comment
by Anahid Hojjati on Thu Dec 09, 2010 09:17 AM PSTDear Souri, some comments are clearly positive like yours and some are negative. There are also comments that are hard to decipher but I really don't have time to think about them much so I treat them randomly as positive or negative. What matters is that friends like you are on IC and I get to interface with them. Also there are readers that can identify with a poem of mine or just like it,which is good. I thank you Souri jan and everyone who reads this comment for taking time to read my poems.
Souri aziz, thanks for your comment and I am glad you liked this poem.
Dear Anahid
by Souri on Thu Dec 09, 2010 11:18 AM PSTWhen I first read your poem today, I truly loved it and can say honestly that I can relate to it.
I wanted to comment on this saying how much your poem touched my feeling, but then got busy with JJ's blog and reading some other content and unfortunately my break time was short.
Now, I just wanted to mention that this is my true honest appreciation of your poem, regardless of the non-sense which I read below from this artificial Comrade. Maybe you know each other on a personal level, but I don't care what he thinks about this new poem of yours. This one, I truly liked it.
thanks for sharing your feeling with us and above all, do not get intimidated by this kind of negative comments. Some of the material posted in this site are so much void of any substances, that make your poems looking like a masterpiece!
Please keep them coming :)
The good behavior of the people, warms our heart and make us thankful..... And the bad ones, just make us to recognize and appreciate the good ones!
باز چی شده دوباره؟ کامی چیکار کرده؟
comradeThu Dec 09, 2010 07:32 AM PST
باز این "کامی" توی هچل شد
یه چیزی گفت و دربدر شد
چه گفتم من دوباره
کزان آناهیدمان پکر شد؟
"بشکنه دست" و ساعد کجایه؟
"نمیگویم بلاگ" آخر چرایه؟
نکن همچین، با خَلق آی سی
که بی تو، داتش ناکامه
Never increase, beyond what is necessary, the number of entities required to explain anything.
Dear Comrade, thanks for your poem
by Anahid Hojjati on Thu Dec 09, 2010 06:42 AM PSTComrade jan, thanks for reading my poem and also taking the time to write one yourself. Hameesheh sorkh bashee.
By the way, I promie that I will not blog any more poems today. JJ can block me for a week if i break my promise. Beshkanad een dast gar neveesad sheree degar emrooz.
by the way, poems in comments are still ok :).
"کامی" در پرواز
comradeThu Dec 09, 2010 06:04 AM PST
مشکل من با تو، عیناً همینه
حواس تو، یا در هوا س، یا در زمینه
از بال کبوتر تا تخم قُمری
مطالب از خودت، هی در میاری
کبوتر، خوشگله؛ صلح آفرینه
ولی "باز" رو باید پایید؛ اون در کمینه
نگو "کامی" چرا اینجور گفتی
که رسم دوستی، امروزه اینه
در تاریخ نمیدونم چندم دسامبر، تقدیم شد به شاعره عزیز، آناهید خانوم.
با احترام، رفیق(کامرَد) کُس شعر زاده ( و با تشکر از خانوم آزاده، که دیگه مجبور نیستم اسم فامیلمو یواشکی بگم)
Never increase, beyond what is necessary, the number of entities required to explain anything.