Anahid Hojjati

I changed picture to one more "paeezi", changed some lines too

This picture is better for the blog because it conveys the fall.

I also changed order of words in some lines.

I can't believe I did not try this sooner

Every time I have a blog, if I used pictures from my Blackberry, I first e-mailed picture to my computer, saved it and then uploaded it from my computer. But no need for that. Once I am writing my blog (or for Farsi ones, after I have the blog, I can do the Edit) and where it says Browse, if I am on my Blacberry, I can use pictures from it, and click upload.  I should have done this much sooner. I uploaded this picture of The new Bay bridge under construction like this. I know bridge has nothing with this poem but this is the one I quickly tried as experiment.

Thanks Muscle Defender for taking time to read my poem

Dear Muscle Defender, thanks for commenting. I am glad that you think it is deep.

great poem

excellent, very deep poem.

Dear Mehman, thanks for your comment.

Dear Mehman, I am glad that you liked the imagery.

Flowing

images.

Dear Ostaad Saadat Noury, thanks for your kind words

Dear Ostaad Saadat Noury, I am glad that you liked this poem. I was just thinking yesterday and I wrote this one very quickly and maybe as they say

هر آنچه از دل برآید , بر دل نشیند.

since sometimes I rewrite a poem few times and spend hours on it to just have it not connecting with readers.  However, those which are written as I am thinking about subjects, seem to touch readers more. Dear Ostaad, thanks for reading my poem and for your encouraging words.

Dear Anahid

Your poem is so delightful and has such a good deep meaning that touches any heart with every word. Thanks.

Dear Azadeh, you are such a great poet and writer and I...

Azadeh jan, you are such a great poet and writer and I so admire your work that it means a lot to me that you liked my poem. As you wrote:"Cheers to the power of illusions."

Impactful poem

Thanks for sharing. I, too, love the lines that Souri has mentioned. They are very original.

Cheers to the power of illusions,

Azadeh

Souri jan, thanks for reading and also for commenting

Souri jan, I am glad that you liked my poem. About "Khialat", we all know that many real loves end so terribly. On the other hand, so much beauty has been created in the world because some people "khialat kardand" about being loved or being in love. So who am I to say that sometimes "Khialat" cannot be better than "vaghieat".

I loved this part:

گاه با واقعیت
گاه با جنینی به نامِ توهم
که روزی خود سقط می گردد

!Very powerful

Thanks Farah jan for the beautiful video

Farahe aziz, thanks for  reading my poem and commenting. Justin Hayward's song is great and I love the autumn leaves in the video. Thanks for sharing.

Forver autumn

Anahid jann

What a moving piece. The last line reminded me of the memorable "Forever Autumn" sang by Justin Hayward . Thank you for the beautiful piece and I hope you like this song:

FR