Hi! I am new to IRANIAN.COM and I am ALENE
This is the best of all sites I have ever BEEN
So pure, so good, yet so fresh and so CLEAN
I am free to comment without curbs of a DEAN
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Let me tell you, I am only EIGHTEEN
I would ever write - I had never FORESEEN
But I am creative - writing is in my GENE(S)
Anything from horses to HALLOWEEN
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Just now, I received a request from IRENE
“Please comment on my poem called JEAN(S)”
My first request and I am very KEEN
My comment should not be anywhere LEAN
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It should steer clear of being MEAN
Irene says, she has just turned NINETEEN
And gets many comments – good to OBSCENE
She likes to dress well but only to PREEN
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She thinks I am the best Comment QUEEN
So I am glad to follow the ROUTINE
And join the fun on the commenting SCENE
I have come across all – old, mids and TEEN(S)
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And now I receive requests UMPTEEN
All laced with sugar and also VELVETEEN
Writer is dead, reader is thriving – I WEEN
Alas, my brain is numb from xylem to XENE
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And it seems just like YESTREEN
When I wanted to write from zinc to ZENE!!!
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Dear Alene,
by rosie is roxy is roshan on Sun Jan 18, 2009 09:35 PM PSTI don't know if you're a ware of this yet, but there is a man on this site who has already been smitten by you. He has written you a poem, all nine of him, which you will find under the unfeatured blogs by clicking on "more blogs" at the bottom right hand corner of the feeatured.
I think it must've been your tutu which won him over...
You have entered the Twilight Zone.
LOL
Rosie
Welcome Alene,
by Multiple Personality Disorder on Sun Jan 18, 2009 08:01 PM PSTWelcome to Hotel California!
I busted my spleen
by friskycatdad on Sun Jan 18, 2009 02:57 PM PSTI was jealous green
As I read your wit meant not mean.
You used words words not spent
On a person hellbent.
But rather, just one more goh lule - een.