من کنم هندی بازی

Louie Louie
by Louie Louie
14-Nov-2010
 

و این منم همان شاعر کاسه گدایی
کنم فریاد برای آن برنج زیادی

دارم دوبل آیدی کنم من استفاده
بسوی منفعت و خود ستأی

کنند دیگران فهمیدن از کاره بنده
و من کنم هندی بازی، قهر بازی

و من کنم دلیت تمام شعرهایم
چون دیگران نفهمند از حقه بازی

که پنداری بالا نسبت بالا نسبت هستند خر ایشان
ولی‌ منم آن سنگ پای قزوین

که من هستم ننر، حسود، خودخواه
اما مامان جان بر من نهد بوس آبدار

ولی‌ هستم من آن سنگ پای قزوین
کنم قشقرک تا دل‌ بخواهی


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