و این منم همان شاعر کاسه گدایی
کنم فریاد برای آن برنج زیادی
دارم دوبل آیدی کنم من استفاده
بسوی منفعت و خود ستأی
کنند دیگران فهمیدن از کاره بنده
و من کنم هندی بازی، قهر بازی
و من کنم دلیت تمام شعرهایم
چون دیگران نفهمند از حقه بازی
که پنداری بالا نسبت بالا نسبت هستند خر ایشان
ولی منم آن سنگ پای قزوین
که من هستم ننر، حسود، خودخواه
اما مامان جان بر من نهد بوس آبدار
ولی هستم من آن سنگ پای قزوین
کنم قشقرک تا دل بخواهی
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by Anahid Hojjati on Fri Dec 03, 2010 08:18 AM PST.
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by Anahid Hojjati on Fri Dec 03, 2010 08:19 AM PST.
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by Louie Louie on Tue Nov 16, 2010 04:28 PM PSTForgot to mention, Ms. Hojjati, I never find those gossipy essays very constructive!
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by Louie Louie on Tue Nov 16, 2010 04:10 PM PSTAntiMozakhraf jan
Thank you! You understood it right!
So there Ms. Hojjati, you've got your answer.
You got served!
No, not you Ms. Hojjati, it was meant for my next door neighbor!
I keep saying it, vali koo goushe shenava!
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by Anahid Hojjati on Fri Dec 03, 2010 08:19 AM PST.
What an excellent question to raise
by AntiMozakhraf on Tue Nov 16, 2010 03:29 PM PSTLouie jan if I may I would like to share what my take was on your poem.
I saw it as a clver and playful exposé on attributes deplorable - jealousy, contempt, a complete lack of self composure, narcicism, dishonesty and more. Reminds me of the 'Iranians are liars' blog. More of us need to take notice of our cultural / personal handicaps. Did I understand your poem correctly Louie?
Thanks again Louie jan. I utterly adore your candor.
And thank you Ms Hojat for helping develop the dialogue with your insightful question.
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by Anahid Hojjati on Fri Dec 03, 2010 08:21 AM PST.
Antimozakhraf
by Louie Louie on Tue Nov 16, 2010 12:25 AM PSTMerci aziz, I feel very rich now. 5000 pounds for poems! Ta cheshme hasoud beterekeh!
I enjoy reading your comments, they are very clever, me likey ;o)
Louie Louie, what was your goal when you wrote this?
by Anahid Hojjati on Tue Nov 16, 2010 10:45 AM PSTLouie Louie, just what is it that you think you will accomplish by writing this poem? I always have a goal when I write a poem. I always have a message and I hope it is always a constructive message. Or if it is not constructive, it is telling about some travesty that happened to people. I am curious to know what is your goal?
Louie Louie Louie!
by AntiMozakhraf on Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:52 PM PSTYou my friend, get the Bridport prize ;)
p.s Man ham roozi beh hendoostan ravam (translation: God help you all if I get left out).
Doustan
by Louie Louie on Mon Nov 15, 2010 04:11 PM PSTThank you so very much for your contributions. You brought back the good old days after the revolution. Again, being so desperate and nothing good on TV we watched all the Indian movies over and over, so much of it that we began to think we were not Irannains but Indians.
Dear Ms. Hojjati, I am very sorry to cause you discomfort (beh jane Feefee jan my pet spider ghasam) this blog was not about you, it was about our next door neighbor who takes lot of Ambien CR and due to the side effects of the medicine behaves quite odd. It gets worse as the moon is full!
//www.youtube.com/watch?v=2aMRvPFwi_8&feature=channel
Bol radha bol snagam hoga ke nahi
by Sadra on Mon Nov 15, 2010 02:18 PM PSTMy contribution to Hendi Bazi
//www.youtube.com/watch?v=byVop4vVMZE
Anahid Jaan, Louie Khan
by Faramarz on Mon Nov 15, 2010 02:11 PM PSTLet's enjoy a nice Hendi-Baazi clip!
//www.youtube.com/watch?v=274Ig7Wm9_0&feature...
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by Anahid Hojjati on Fri Dec 03, 2010 08:23 AM PST.