Manoucher Avaznia

آرش جان؛

شرمنده که بیش از این نمی دانم.  از مهربانی شما سپاسگزارم.

ژالهو جان؛

 در پیشگاه حضرت عشق هرگز حیا مدار

در تاختن بسوی یار چه نیازی به توسنی؟

طاهره جان

Thank you for sharing.  You are so kind as usual.

Souri Jaan;

Thank you for the comment.  I am so sorry that I am late again.  "Past" here is not about working, rather it refers to a kind of absolute skeptical materialistic frame of mind that I carried along for over twenty years that eventually led me to "baraoot'e bee-eemaanee".  The purpose of bringing the explanation about "Saaghee'e Bee-Eemaan" was to just say that I am not talking about anyone else.  I refer to myself and if there is any negative connotation of the word, it is about myself only.  Another word about "Seem-Kolah-Raazee" that I found it was better I had added at the explanation is that Damaavand always has a white hat (snow cap) on its head; and also it resides beside Rey (Shahr'e Rey) that was a historic cross-road on Iranian trade, culture, and political scene for many centuries and even melenia.

Thank you again

Such a pleasure to read your work

Dear Manoucher,

You are so kind not to forget us with your magnificent poems. It is so good to see your work again. Be well, be kind and be generous to your impatient admirers.

Arash M-K

Dear Manoucher, beautiful again!

این سان که در سرود تو خون و طراوت است
صد بیشه ارغوانی‌ و صد باغ سوسنی
 

Dear Mr Avaznia:

I agree with my dear Souri, this is so beautiful. I have a quotation to share with you , may it bring some peace to you, sir.

The troubles of this world pass, and what we have left is what we have made of our souls, so it is to this we must look — to becoming more spiritual, drawing nearer to God, no matter what our human minds and bodies go through.

Most Regards,

Tahirih

I just can't stop

admiring you....Dear Manouchehr, I was so tired, it's late now and I wanted to leave the site, when I suddenly saw your poem posted here

what a masterpiece. I should say I'm speechless. Where do you go to find such a beautiful "tashbihaat" like damavand = seem kolahe raazi

:I loved that beit 

آن شهپر پروازت نشکست به توفانها

آن لحظه شکستی که بر پست شدی راضی.

!!Just amazing

But, Manouchehr jan, we all have to work to meet the end of the month:O) working is always good, not working is being past

cheers, my great poet friend