Manoucher Avaznia

Abarmard Jaan:

Thank you for the comment, but you have over-evaluated me by far.  Sepaas.

Modern Jalaledin

Beautiful, sounds like a modern Jalaledin ;)

Thanks

Killjoy Jaan;

I definitely like both of them and thank you for the "zahmat".  

Souri Jaan;

You definitely enriched what I wrote before and I thank you for that.   I was more inclined to think of the postive imperative made with the "bon'e fe'el" such as "ro".  Thank you for reviving this.

Ebi Jaan;

Thank you for the poem.

another good one KJ

Are you kidding? who would let go of such great talent!  :0) 

IRANdokht

Dear Irandokht,

Thanks!

And this is for you:

Gar rahaa shavi ze man o roy gardaani

To nadaani ey balaa keh cheha ferestamat!

LOL KillJoy

I am impressed, this is very joyful!

I had no idea you could rhyme so well :0)  

IRANdokht

Har Aanche Az Del Bar Aayad

Bar Del Neshinad!

Vagar ekh koni beest melyoon dolaar

Man baa safine'i be fazaa mifestamat!

Dear Mr. Avaznia,

Another beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this one, too.

Recently, I read your talk about not being able to translate your book into Persian because of the financial difficulties involved.

Remembering that talk, here's what I came up with:

Taa nabari ranj zin tavaromeh laakerdaar

Yek man khiaar o deegi por az maast miferestamat!

I hope you like maast o khiar.

Dear Manouchehr/ A Parsa

Manouchehr jan, beautiful poem as always. I liked also your  " snow" poem a lot. I should post my appreciation under that beautiful poem too. I really loved both.

About the word " mouyeedan" :

I believe the positive imperative for this word is " bmouy" which is used sometime by Hafez and other "bozorgan sher Farsi"....but as you just said it is used rarely, like "bmouy ei del" or " bmouyd yaran"..and so on.

Again thanks for your great poems, we are lucky to have you among us .

Manucher Aziz.

روزی که خیال دلستان رقص کند

یک جان چکند که صد جهان رقص کند

هر پرده که میزنند در خانه‌ی دل

مسکنی تن بینوا همان رقص کند

Irandokht Jaan;

Thank you for the comment.  Sُweet is the master whom I tried to immitate.  I mean Hafez.

ای هد هد صبا به سبا می فرستمت

بنگر که ازکجا به کجا می فرستمت.

Ali Jaan;

"Mooeedan" is "Mooyeh Kardan" and it means "whining", or "moaning": more whining than moaning.  "Mooyeh" in the form of noun and "Mooyeh Kardan" as a double word verb have been frequently used in Farsi, wherease "Mooeedan" and its negative imperative form "Mamooy" is not commonly used.  Positive imperative form "Mooy", perhaps, doesn't exist as it may cause confusion with the "Mooy" menaing hair.  I do not recall having seen it used.  My knowledge of Paarsee literature is very limited, anyway.  So, by the word "Mamooy", I mean "do not whine" or "do not moan". 

sweet

sweet and romantic

beautiful poem again Manoucher aziz, thank you!

IRANdokht

Binava

A nice and touchin piece. I never heard of the word Mamooi, but I assume it means do not die. Right?

khody