رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

قدغن

Penny,

Sorry I made a spelling mistake. Ghadeghan means Forbidden. I changed it. Thank you for letting me know.

I'm impressed by your willing to learn Farsi !

Thake care.

" غدقن " ?

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The word
" غدقن "
is not in my dictionary.
According to my dictionary either one these is the correct spelling:
" غدغن "
or
" قدغن "
But it refers to the latter for the meaning:
"prohibition, prohibited, forbidden"

Thanks to all

Your lines warmed my old heart.

Nazanin you should still be young ;-) I mean your reference to Paradise and Hell is "academique" .

When you are young, you don't like to be forbiden and when there are too many forbiden things your life turns to a kind of Hell (especialy now days in our country), 

When you are older, you are no more able to do what you want to do, even if you have more money and possibility. So you tell yourself the past was Paradise!

To tell you all, I did these lines for my best freind who died very young many years ago in a car accident.

If there is a Paradise somewhere, I'm sure he is in it, even if he did many forbidden things.

Roohash Shad

Beautiful

Beautiful.

مویِ سپید را فَلَکم رایگان نداد

این رشته را به نقدِ جوانی خریده ام ( از رهیِ معیری )

Orang, bravo! c'etait tres

Orang, bravo! c'etait tres belle.
Vali chera Jahanam and Ghadaghan? I always associate ghadaghan with paradise because in order to get in you have to avoid a lot of ghadaghan things. Hell is ghadaghan too? Pass man koja beram?
N

یک خط هم وصف طرف

سیب سرخی را به من بخشید و رفت
عاقبت برعشق من خندید و رفت
اشک در چشمان سردم حلقه زد
بی مروت گریه ام را...دید و رفت

.Your poem reminded me of this
.Please write again

Thanks Ali p

Take Care ..

Orang

Beautiful !

Jaanaa sokhan az zabaaneh maa meegooee...

Good job!