روی ابرها

روی ابرها
by Orang Gholikhani
01-Jul-2010
 

روی ابرها

خانه إی دارم

با دری سفید و بی جدار

روی ابرها

یاوری دارم

که میداند مرا بی نام

روی ابرها

همدمی دارم

سنگ صبوری بی زمان

روی ابرها

دوستی دارم

ساکن و بی انتظار

روی ابرها

خانه إی دارم

با حرفی آزاد و بی ریا

روی ابرها

بستری دارم

در آنجا رویا شعر زیباأیست

روی ابرها

ایرانی دارم

که در خواب هم نمیبینم

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Translation

by Orang Gholikhani on Sun Jul 04, 2010 09:24 AM PDT

 Thanks to MPD translation , I made some changes. If anybody sees any improvement, let me know.

Over clouds

I have a house

With white doors, without walls

Over clouds

I have a companion

She knows me anonymously

Over clouds

I have a mate

A patient-stone, timeless

Over clouds

I have a friend

Calm, without expectations

Over clouds

I have a house

Candid, with free words

Over clouds I have a bed

 Upon it, dreams of beautiful poems

 Over clouds

 I have a little Iran

 Unimaginable in the earth, even in my dreams


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Orang Gholikhani

Anonymouse aziz Thank you

by Orang Gholikhani on Fri Jul 02, 2010 01:18 AM PDT

Your comments are always sacred ;-)

Orang


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Orang Gholikhani

شراب قرمز عزیز شما کجا بودی

Orang Gholikhani
Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:55 AM PDT

من اینجا بودم و دلمان از کمتهای شما تنگ شده بود

مرسی

اورنگ


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Orang Gholikhani

روزی ایران از خواب روی ابر بیدار خواهد شد علی جان

Orang Gholikhani
Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:52 AM PDT

Thanks for your comment.

Orang


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Orang Gholikhani

Souri jan this is an opportunity for all of us

by Orang Gholikhani on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:49 AM PDT

Thanks for your comment.

Orang


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Orang Gholikhani

thanks dordooneh

by Orang Gholikhani on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:47 AM PDT

Thanks for your comment

Orang


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Orang Gholikhani

MDP Thanks for Translation just a change

by Orang Gholikhani on Fri Jul 02, 2010 12:46 AM PDT

Thanks MDP for translation, just a remark for : I have a companion, I am nameless, she knows

I would say : I have a companion, she knows me anonymously.

Thanks

Orang


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Multiple Personality Disorder

On clouds

by Multiple Personality Disorder on Thu Jul 01, 2010 11:42 PM PDT

.

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On clouds

I have a house

with white doors, without walls

On clouds

I have a companion

I am nameless, she knows

On clouds

I have a mate

a patient-stone, timeless

On clouds

I have a friend

Calm, without expectations

On clouds

I have a house

candid, with free words

On clouds

I have a bed

upon it, dreams of beautiful poems

On clouds

I have Iran

Unimaginable, even in my dreams

 


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Dordooneh

As always

by Dordooneh on Thu Jul 01, 2010 04:59 PM PDT

Besyar latif va ziba. Merci


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Souri

Lovely!

by Souri on Thu Jul 01, 2010 04:51 PM PDT

I loved your poem Orang jon.  So true, so delneshin.

I'm so glad that this little Iran over the clouds, gave me the opportunity to make friends like yourself and some others.

Thanks for this beautiful poem.


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Ali P.

You said it my Friend...

by Ali P. on Thu Jul 01, 2010 04:24 PM PDT

روی ابرها

ایرانی دارم

که در خواب هم نمیبینم...


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Red Wine

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by Red Wine on Thu Jul 01, 2010 04:09 PM PDT

اُرنگ‌ جان حال و احوالت چطور است بالامْ جان؟ دلمان برای نوشته هایت تنگ شده بود! اِلهی که همیشه خیر ببینی که تو از صالحین هستی.


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Anonymouse

Very nice Orang jaan! A friend in sky!

by Anonymouse on Thu Jul 01, 2010 03:39 PM PDT

Everything is sacred


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