رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

Anonym

This is how it goes"

Aankas ke be daanad va be daanad ke be daanad

asb-e sharaf az gonbad-e gardoon bejehaanad

Aankas ke be daanad va na daanad ke be daand

Langaan kharak-e kheesh be manzel beresaanad 

Aankas ke na daanad va be daanad ke na daanad

beedaarsh namaae'ed ke bas khofteh namaanad

Aankas ke na daanad va na daanad ke na daanad

Dar jahl-e morkkab abaddoldahr bemaanad.

Glad!

I am glad that you got what I meant by ":-)"

I read the poem, and smiled.

You added one smile, to one (ugly!)face.

Also, interesting take on a classic. I'd like you to see more(i.e., "Tavaanaa bovad, har keh daanaa bovad...Is that so?)

Thnx,

Ali P.

Old Poem New Life

The first lines are my "adapted version" of poem which anonym mention.

I was inspired by this beautiful old poem and wanted to remind it with a more actual interpretation and mixing it with some personal thoughts

Thanks to Ali for support :-)

Different version

I am not sure who or where this version comes from, but this is how I remember it:

On kas keh nadanad va bedanad ke nadanad
Sar manzel-e khish be maghsad beresanad

On kas keh nadanad va nadanad ke nadanad
Dar jahl-e abad-ol dahl bemanad

:-)

:-)