رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

Merci Azarin Jan

Thanks Azarin Jan,

I should confess that when I wrote it, I didn't expect such reception and I thought even nobody would remark it !

It is the proof that each poem has his own destiny and own caractere !

Ghorbanat

Orang 

5 Aafarin

Great little gem of a poem! Bravo, Orang jan!

Anahid jan, you could leave 5 comments too :-)

Thank you again, I apreciated your poem about Portland too.

Ghorbanat

Orang

What if we read more than five times?

Very nice poem.Thanks again Orang jan for sharing with us.

Thanks Shirine Jan

I hope you enjoyed it 5 times

Ghorbanat

Orang

و پنج بار

و پنج بار خواندن این نوشته ها...

که روی انسان اثر میگذارد

شیرین

Thanks Orang jan for the link

I think this one is one of those poems that I know that I am missing parts of it and there are references that I don't get but still it is nice. I will be visiting the city that I went to university more than 25 years ago. Thinking back, there are already people from that time who have passed away and one could be depressed about it but there were friends that I did have good times with them and as you noted :"

پنج راه

پنج رفیق

پنج سرنوشت

از زندگی هر چه هست بایدگرفت

Anahid , Soosan Khanoom and Ali Jan

I start with ladies by galentrie ;-)

Soosan Khanoom, 5 Merci for your comment and 5 stars apreciation.

Anahid jan, for this poem, I've been inspired by 5 stages of Grief //www.memorialhospital.org/library/general/stress-the-3.html you could read again the poem with this key and find out another view.

Ali Jan, Happy you continue following and accepting my poems as they are.

Ghorban Hamegi.

Orang

پنج ستاره

I give this poem five stars

: )

...

Wow!!!!

You did it again my friend!

Very acidic! :-)

Thanks Orang jan for your beautiful poem

Now that you wrote this, as they say :

تو نخِ پنج , بیشتر خواهم رفت . 

I am going to notice more facts about five. I have already noticed that when kids are in high school, many have about five best friends. I just saw that youkind of refer to this fact, where you note:

پنج راه

پنج رفیق

پنج سرنوشت

از زندگی هر چه هست بایدگرفت

Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.