رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

sharmandeh

Ebi Jan,

You make me "Sharmandeh". You are so kind.

I've a huge respect and love for Khayam and Hafez. For me they are the best.

I cannot imagine one second be more meaning ful ! 

However thanks a compliment makes always pleasure. 

Orang

Orang jaan

Yes it is a refrence to Khayyam's .Dear, ghasde jesaarat nabood! I believe yours carries a deeper meaning here,since Daliraan-e-Tangestaan fought the British invading forces who landed in Tangestaan after crossing the Persian Gulf in ships.To me yours has more meaning!.

آنانکه محیط فضل و آداب شدند

در جمع کمال شمع اصحاب شدند

ره زین شب تاریک نبردند برون

گفتند فسانه ای و در خواب شدند

Those who went in pursuit of knowledge
Soared up so high, stretched the edge
Were still encaged by the same dark hedge
Brought us some tales ere life to death pledge

Ok

thnaks for your attention

Azarin, 

I'didn't plan to do the reste but why not, I'll see if I can do. I like challenges ;-)

Ebi jan,

well observed, if I'm not wrong it is from khayam. I keep your idea and I'll change mine Goftand Fassanei Ghargh Shodand

Lovely!

Looking forward to read the rest...the missing letters and their hidden meanings (or the "instantiation" of their meanings! :-)
Azarin

Orang jaan

گفتند فسانه ای و در خاک شدند......

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