رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

Yes, New York : 100/100

I love Manhattan !! This is my city. You are %100 right about that. I don't know SF yet, but I'm sure it's one of the most beauriful place.

Souri jan and princess khanoom ;-)

Still thanks for kind words as always.

Somewhere it is better to visit a city with paradox than a flat city but in US my preference goes always  to NY and SF. 

Orang jan

Beautiful poem, as always. very nice, very true. I also loved what you just said in this comment below :

" I was wondering from American speech, saying future has been created by
immigrant people in LA because they have had a dream about future and
some Iranian immigrants who are living there and dream about their
past!"

Paradox my dear !!

You are an observator poet :D)

Lovely and insightful!

I, too, can relate to this depiction of the city of angles. Thanks, Orang jan!

To Irandokht and Q

thanks for your comments.

I'v been there this summer and of course I'll be back for other visits if "khoda bekhad" ;-)

I was wondering from American speech, saying future has been created by immigrant people in LA because they have had a dream about future and some Iranian immigrants who are living there and dream about their past!

 Take care.

Beautiful

so much of it is mental, not physical.

so true

I liked your description...  you're still going to visit, right?  ;-)

Thanks for the nice poem

IRANdokht

Monda jan

Very happy you apreciate it. Thanks for your comment.

To Mahi Sia

Sorry for typo mistake, I changed it.

پرواز قو روی دریاچه آزادی

قو خیلی زیبا و مغرور روی دریاچه مینشیند ولی آزاد نیست چون راهی به دریا ندارد(مثل ماهی سیاه کوچک ) و خارج ازدریاچه دیگر زیبا و مغرور  نیست  

پرواز غو روی دریاچه آزادی???????

پرواز غو روی دریاچه آزادی
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عنایت بفرماید که منظوراز" قو و پرواز روی دریاچه آزادی" چیه

So descriptive of L.A.

and the illusions of the lost. So many of your metaphors resonate with me deeply. Thank you Orang.