رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

Rainbowcountery

Thnaks RangineKaman jan,

You are welcome.

Orang

ای کاش منهم متوانستم به این قشنگی شعر بنویسم

Orang Jan,

THANKS. I really enjoined the song.

Irandokht jan

Thanks for your kind words.

It is also a blessing to having friends like you and others in this site. I don't name all because I fear forgetting some of them.

Ghadreh hameh shoma ra midoonam.  

souri jan

Hafez has always been a support for me  as for many other Iranians.

thanks for you support too.

Ghorbanat.

Anhaid jan

Thanks so much for your kind words. Wanting memorizing my humble work makes me proud.

memorizing poems has helped our culture and soul  to survived in the past. so we need keep pushing.

Take care.

very nice Orang jan

It's a blessing to be able to express yourself through poetry. 

this is coming from someone who cannot write even one poetic sentence!

ghadresho bedoon ;-)

IRANdokht

Orang jan, here's Hafez's support :)

به کوی میکده هر سالکی که ره دانست

دری دگر زدن اندیشه تبـه دانـسـت

زمانـه افـسر رندی نداد جز به کسی
کـه سرفرازی عالم در این کله دانسـت

بر آستانـه میخانه هر که یافـت رهی
ز فیض جام می اسرار خانقه دانـسـت

هر آن که راز دو عالم ز خـط ساغر خواند
رموز جام جم از نقش خاک ره دانسـت

ورای طاعـت دیوانـگان ز ما مطـلـب
کـه شیخ مذهب ما عاقلی گنه دانست

دلم ز نرگس ساقی امان نخواست به جان
چرا که شیوه آن ترک دل سیه دانسـت

ز جور کوکب طالع سحرگهان چشـمـم
چنان گریست که ناهید دید و مه دانست

حدیث حافـظ و ساغر که می‌زند پنـهان
چه جای محتسب و شحنه پادشه دانست

بلندمرتـبـه شاهی که نه رواق سپهر
نـمونـه‌ای ز خـم طاق بارگه دانست

your poem is so beautiful that I am going to memorize it

Dear Orang, Your poem is so very beautiful. I have to write it down in my notebook and memorize it. Hafez was your "poshteeban" that you wrote this excellent poem.