Peace On The "Ocean" - Of "Life"

Shaer
by Shaer
29-Mar-2008
 

On The wave, Surfing On The Ocean ..
No calamity In sight, All Blue Ocean ..

All creatures Of The Sea, At Peace With One another ..
No Enmity, All Bliss ..

The Tenderness Of The Moment, Enveloped With Joy ..
No Animosity, Just Plain Pleasure ..

As Time Flows, From One Minute To The Next ..
The Glory Of Sun, Nurturing All ..

The Spirit Flows, From One Creation to The Next ..
Patiently waiting, Nurturing All ..

No Juxtaposition, All Consistent with Plan ..
No Randomness, All Perfectly Planned ..

From The Depths Of The Ocean, To The Very surface ..
All knowledge, Nothing Left To Chance ..

Come My Brother, Let's Drink Of The Ocean Of Life ..
Let's Quench Our Thirst, Nothing Left To Chance ..

As Jesus Was Born, So Was Moses And Mohammad ..
All In Time, Nothing Left To Chance ..

All Creation, Every Step And The Next ..
All Perfectly Planned, Nothing Left To Chance ..

Your Birth, Existence, Very Spirit ..
Beautifully Schemed, Nothing Left To Chance ..

Come My Brother, Let's Drink From this Cup Of "Joy" ..
Our Coming Together, Never Left To Chance ..

As Mollana Met "Shams", So Will You Meet "Others" ..
Their Wasn't By Chance, Neither Will Be "Yours" ..

The God Of Creation, Hasn't Planned Everything ..
Yet He Is all Aware, Nothing Left To Chance ..

Come My "Brother" ..
"Let's" ..

"Fulfill" ..
"Our" ..

"Destiny" ..

"Nothing" Left To Chance ..

Shae'r
Copyright ©2008 Shae'r

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Shaer

Dear Ali

by Shaer on Sun Mar 30, 2008 01:58 PM PDT

Thank You Very Much For Your Kind Words ..

As I Have Mentioned Before, Old Habits Are Really "Hard" To Break ..

I Did Not Forget About Your Constructive Criticism From The Past ..

Tks again .. :)


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Ali A Parsa

Constructive criticism!

by Ali A Parsa on Sun Mar 30, 2008 01:09 PM PDT

Once again thanks for your inspirational modern poetry. I have always believed that extending help to talented people like you is very much worth the time and effeort as you are in a position to influence so many.

I hope you recall my reminding you that capitalizing all your words is in violation of English languate that you use to communicate. You thanked me for that and mentioned that that is a habit and difficult to shake or something to that effect. Well, since then I have found all of your words capitalzed as previously and it bothers to read your otherwise nice poems.

On another note, I wonder what gender you are, but it seems like you are a male and definitely younger than I am and have more command of English language than Persian. One evidence for that is that you seem like you do not defferenciate between the word Mollana and Mowlana and, my brother, there is a great difference. Mowla means guru and in Arabic Mowlana means Our Guru. That Mowlana refers to Rumi or Mowlana Jalallodinn Rumi and not our Mollana. So please correct that in your poems so the future generations know what you are writing about.

Let me also mention that I am sure as you inspire us you also take pleasure in knowing that we are positively affected by your words.

Good luck my fellow traveler on the never-ending spiritual path.

 

khody


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Shaer

Please Read

by Shaer on Sat Mar 29, 2008 02:50 AM PDT

I have put together three (3) Collections of Poems on the following themes:

I. Encouragement and Healing, with thirty seven (37) Poems;

II. Truth, with three (3) Poems; and,

III. Having Arrived, with seven (7) Poems.

Many people have already responded to get the Collections. If you are interested, please e-mail me through Iranian.com, and I will send you all three (3) Collections as soon as I receive your e-mail.

To e-mail me, go to my Blog, at the link below, and after logging in, Click on the Tab Contact on top Of the page:

//iranian.com/main/member/shaer

Again, Many Thanks .. :)


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