Manoucher Avaznia

Nazy Jaan;

Wonderfully beautiful poem.  Your article is among the rare viewpoints that I hardly disagree with any of its points.  Though short and concise, it covers almost every aspect of the grave adventure of the rising of our generation.  I could not wait for the time that I could put some words in verse to write in response.  I will read your article again.

نازی گزیده گفت.

غور درون نمود.

فارق ز سبک و وزن

از گلستان نظم 

با سحر خامه اش

رازی دگر گشود.

Thank You for sahring.

Nazy jaan

I loved your words here. So beautifully said, so truly.

It's like we just discovered now, what a burned generation (nasle soukhteh) we became ! I feel a sense of togetherness with all of you.

Your words touched my heart. thanks you.

Ali Jaan;

Falagh:  sounds like Shafagh is the twilight (in the early morning) while Shafagh is a kind of darkness after sunset.  (Gorg-o-Meesh) before the clearing of the sky.

Lojjeh: Absolute Darkness. Especially used with night.

Chakaad:  Seteegh; the highest point of a mountain: Apex: zenith of the mountain

Manoucher John

Second line: فلق

14th line from the bottom: لجه

4th line from the bottom: چکاد

I don't know these words. I'd appreciate it, if you explained.

Bound in love

Children of hope
Children of courage
Children of sweet ignorance

Lost in words
Lost in promises
Lost in smoke
Lost in bereavement

Found in pain
Found in realization
Found in unlikely friendships
Found in rosewater and rosaries

United in pity
United in knowledge
United in hope

Bound in love.

My Generation: //iranian.com/main/2007/my-generation

Mashad's Collage of Life:
//iranian.com/Kaviani/2007/July/Life/inde...

Souri Jaan;

Reality of our generation's life is sad.  Isn't it?  Also, it is really epical, sweet, and beautiful.  Which epical masterpiece in the world lacks tragic scenes?

Thank You

Ali Jaan;

Gaahee Harfhaaye Bozorgtar Az Dahaanam Meezanam.  Gaahee ham Nameedaanam Che Meegooyam.  Thank you very much.  If there is a question that I can answer, please ask.  I will never be embarassed to say "I don't know". 

Sad and beautiful ....

This is wonderful, as always. The font of this poem is sad, but you paint it so beautifully , it make us hopeful again. Very meaningful, I loved it. Thank you Manouchehr.

Wow!

I enjoyed reading your poem. There were a couple of words, I have to go and look up. Deeplom beh baalaa bood!

Yours,

Ali P.