Persian Westender

Souri

Thank you again for your encouragements and interests to my works. Your correction of the word was legitimate, and that was a typo. You're welcome to do more 'fozooli ':-) and I do have interest to audiences like you.

ps: I write every kind of mozakhrafs, but mostly poems.

good night 

dear Persian Westender

I had never read a poem from you before and didn't know you also write poems. Although you may be not so much interested to an audience like me :o) I have to say this poem of your was a very great and meaningful one. I really enjoyed this part 

من در تناوب زمین خوردن و بلند شدن

زخم‌های خویش را پاداش داده ام

و در یکباره بلند خوردن و زمین شدن

تمام اصرار مرگ را فاش داده ام

Your poem is wonderful, very beautiful.

PS: a little correction (sorry my fozoli,dear) the word "Asraar" in Persian, must be with a "sin" and not a "sat" like esraar = insist

Thank for sharing your beautiful work. I encourage you to post more and more of you works here