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persian westender
by persian westender
19-Jul-2010
 

تو کویر اگرچه هیچ سبزه‌ای نیست

در عوض هیچ علف هرزه‌ای نیست

سخته بی خونمونی، ولی‌ بجا ش

ترس آوار زمین لرزه‌ای نیست

می‌شه زندگی‌رو جور دیگه دید

می‌شه تو باغچه گلای تازه چید

قبل از اینکه اون شما رو بکنه

بیائید و زندگی‌ رو بکنید....

تیر ۱۳۸۹


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divaneh jan

by persian westender on


  I was thinking, those with the all-empty glasses still can be grateful of having a glass! But on the second thought, who am I to tell people how to look at things in their lives? Maybe I was just babbling what Omar khayam has said long time ago...

 

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divaneh

Good to see you back

by divaneh on

Like your poem. Yes, it depends how you look at it. My glass if half full. And with reference to your last verses, it's too late. Life has been doing it to me for a lifetime.


persian westender

Orang jan

by persian westender on

You are very welcome to comment about my poem(s). The non-formal tone of the poem was started from the begining (or it was intended to be that way), e.g., "too kavir" instead of  "dar kavir"...

 

Cheers

 


persian westender

Anonymouse jan

by persian westender on

Its not "khas va khaashak". In fact no political implications was intended. Thank you for reading...

 


Orang Gholikhani

PW jan beautiful

by Orang Gholikhani on

PW jan,

I apreciate a lot your poem, espcially the beginning:

تو کویر اگرچه هیچ سبزه‌ای نیست

در عوض هیچ علف هرزه‌ای نیست

It is not my way to make remarks about poems, I don't like do it and I beg your pardon in advance but this time I need do it because your poem is very beautiful.

Why after this super beginning you change and write with a "speaking" manner. I mean "bikhoonemooni" instead of Bikhanemani ! or "Golay" instead "Gholhai".

However It is a wonderful poem and thanks for sharing.

Cheers

Orang

 


Anonymouse

PW jaan this is controversial on so many levels! 'Green' weeds?!

by Anonymouse on

But very nice, none-the-less. 

Everything is sacred