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persian westender
by persian westender
23-Mar-2011
 

I came home late night. Tired> noticing a message on the phone’s answering machine> It’d been long that I hadn’t a message on my>>Phone. So, rushed to >>check:

Surprising/unusual/unprecedented/ message > ...of an unknown person: Unrecognizable words of >>? >Most likely a women reciting/murmuring/mumbling?/crying??/seeking help???/ checke..d for the calller>?? info.....;”NO AVAILABLE NAME AND NO.”

>Could be .....a wrong/prank ....call///???? Something..thing in ??>>her voice>>.Sou.nding....>> familiar!!!!

Curiosity >> listening over > and over>..over and over>> background noise of her talks> excruciating>.>

As if  ..>(she’sbeen) caught up in the storm...The wind was blowing (wheeeeeeshhhh) in your ..>>ear...>>

Becoming obsession,>> >finding some.....[ words]after all >>>>>hardly recognizable: [....] & [....]

I, ......Obsessed/puzzled<<<<<Her voice:/Haunting

Who >could... she be???be? she? Who? What???Going...Going thru the words:[....]????Ohhhhhh

I,.....Un//known fear””””””””** Heart ‘pounding””””’**>>.Sweating>>>fear  //>>>comin..g// over>>.Listening .over>.>>a.nd over ........nonethelesssssss...sssssssss.

Its >>>>midni.ght.>>>.... Exha>>.usting,...anex./;,.h...a...usti..g..>>>>> nig>ht.

Bu>>.T:

I  f>>ou?n,...>>d..w/h>o .................. s,h....>>>>e w<>>>>>>a......////////s............................................................................................BiP.BiP.BiP 

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Explanation

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The text is formatted this way on purpose. As it becomes clearer to me (protagonist) that what’s going on regarding the message(content), the text becomes more disintegrated and fragmented to the readers (form); making it a paradox of content and form.... and making it impossible to figure out what’s going on, just in the time of clarification.

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It's all very interesting, but could you please explain

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I didn't get it, what's up with the way the text is formated.  It's very original and I am sure there is a good reason for it, but please explain.


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-Thank you Anahid!

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Very nice dear PW.

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thanks for sharing.