آسمان تاريک نيست
بر تارک اين آبى بى انتها
لکه اى نيست از ابر سياه.
طوفان در کرانه آرامش
در کمين ننشسته است
بارانى سرد نمى بارد
تا تبى سوزان فروکشد.
زمستانى نيست
تا انجماد آه عشق
بر شيشه پنجره را نقش زند.
در آستين فلک امروز
انگار توطئه اى در کار نيست.
روزى است پاک و روشن
هوا چنان آفتابى
که سفر باد را ميتوان
با چشم ديد
گذر خاطره انگيزش را
در ذهن خيال به تصوير کشيد.
پس چرا غمگين است
تماشاى نسيم
که هزاران هزار آروزى
پرپر شده گلهاى قاصدک را
در حضور خاموش ما
براى هميشه در خاک ميکشد.
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Jenaban Anglophile, SK, Mehrban, etc.
by All-Iranians on Wed Apr 25, 2012 12:12 PM PDT1. The Life of Parviz Natel Khanlari
//www.persianmirror.com/Article_det.cfm?id=1905&authorid=119&getArticleCategory=59&getArticleSubCategory=35
2. Parviz Natel-Khanlari
//en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Parviz_Natel-Khanlari
3. Dr Khanlari was never the president of Tehran University.
4. All-Iranians also agree with SK & Mehrban: The poem, the subject of this blog is beautiful.
Well one could also look at it differently
by Mehrban on Wed Apr 25, 2012 09:36 AM PDTOne could say that the blogger is in fact promoting the personality (in this case Mr. Khanlari). and maybe the family owes Mr. Adib :).
I agree with SK, the poem, the subject of this blog is beautiful.
anglophil jan
by Soosan Khanoom on Wed Apr 25, 2012 08:31 AM PDTI only spent a night in England, The reason was me missing my flight but never really been there ...
thanks a bunch for the info on him ...
: )
Dear Saeed
by Soosan Khanoom on Wed Apr 25, 2012 08:30 AM PDTSorry not to thank you earlier for such a beautiful blog of yours.
Oh ...how I wish that we could hug the blue sky and all the joyful feelings that it brings without ever letting it go.
But it is the sad feeling inside that we should let go of .....
Soosan Khanom-e aziz
by anglophile on Wed Apr 25, 2012 08:31 AM PDTFirst of all thank you for being such a fun loving personality. If I remember rightly you must have spent sometime in Britain and this should explain your subtle sense of humour.
Secondly the person in Mr AdibJavid's avatar is the late Dr Parviz Naatel-Khaanlari who was a prominent literary and cultural figure with great works in both prose and poetry. His most famous poetic work is "Oghaab" (Eagle)
//persianpoem.blogfa.com/post-40.aspx
He was a professor of Tehran university (even a chancellor if I am not mistaken) and a one time minister of education.
Best wishes
A.
Albaloo has brought up a good point
by Soosan Khanoom on Wed Apr 25, 2012 08:12 AM PDTadibjavid has already replied in a good manner.
On this site we even have user ID called " Imam-e Zaman ".. so nothing is sacred really .. lol
VPK jan I had no idea that IC had any greeting department ..
by Soosan Khanoom on Wed Apr 25, 2012 08:03 AM PDTlol
anglophile I love your sense of humor ..
by Soosan Khanoom on Wed Apr 25, 2012 08:04 AM PDTMahvash has shown some strange sensitivity to this particular Avatar but I should say that I have no idea who this person even is. I am glad that I am spending some time on IC at least I get to know many Iranian characters which I assume should be famous.
Not only I have been away from Iran for too long but also from any important related character.
Who is this guy anyway?
مهوش خانم
anglophileWed Apr 25, 2012 07:48 AM PDT
اگه اینطور که شما میگی درست باشه بهتره من برم یه وکیل گردن کلفت پیدا کنم چون از تقی زاده گرفته تا وینستون چرچیل و ماگارت تاچر بناس منو "سؤ" کنن! خیلی ممنون که خبرم کردی.
thanks for clarification
by Mahvash Shahegh on Wed Apr 25, 2012 07:40 AM PDTThank you VP of Khorasan for your clarification. I appreciate your support and Anahid's as well.
Very well said, Anahid! I, totally, agree with you.
to use someone's picture as Avatar is done sometimes to
by Anahid Hojjati on Wed Apr 25, 2012 07:35 AM PDThonor them. For instance, many times on facebook it is requested for many users to change their profile picture to a picture of Neda Agha Soltan or some other figures. However, sometimes users who use names like truth checker, adib javid, or use pictures of the great ones may be under mistaken assumption that by using these pictures or names, other users think that they are indeed adib Javid or have some relation to someone great or are somehow more truthful. Then when they get criticized, some of these users with grand user names or avatars can't take it.
If I start calling myself "daneshmande gerami", does that mean that people have to agree with any scientific post that I make? I don't think so but unfortunately some users on this site time and time again exhibit that they really believe their own propaganda.
Mr. Adib has
by Albaloo on Wed Apr 25, 2012 07:32 AM PDTMr. Adib has politely replied to her. Still she keeps repeating herself.
OK, May be get over with it is rude.
Mahvash Khanum, Could you please be kind enough to not bother with people's Avatar?
Dear Mahvash
by Veiled Prophet of Khorasan on Wed Apr 25, 2012 07:21 AM PDTFlag means the post is "abusive" or "personal attack". It will be reviewed by the admin. If really abusive will be removed and if a person does major and repeated abuse they may be banned.
In my opinion yours are not abusive and the flag is with no merit. However use of pictures is frequent although you or I may not like it. Nevertheless you have a right and do not need to "get over" anything so please don't worry.
Albaloo: Mahvash has a right to her opinion and please show some respect. She is probably new and this is not a good way to greet her.
Mahvash Khanum
by Albaloo on Wed Apr 25, 2012 07:07 AM PDTNobody is going to sue this site for allowing such Avatars. The public figure's Avatars are being used all over the internet. No one takes it seriously. What is your problem? Get over with it.
Shed some light
by Mahvash Shahegh on Wed Apr 25, 2012 06:57 AM PDTI am sorry that I am so naive. What does flag mean and who can do it? Please somebody shed some lights on my ignorance.
Anahid is right
by Veiled Prophet of Khorasan on Wed Apr 25, 2012 06:49 AM PDTWhy indeed are comments with nothing abusive being flagged. In fact Mahvash is making perfectly reasonable statements. You may agree or disagree but they are not abusive at all.
why are Mahvash's comments flagged?
by Anahid Hojjati on Wed Apr 25, 2012 06:30 AM PDTnot that i necessarily agree with her but in no way, her comments are abusive. it is her opinion and some share it and some don't. however, they are nothing to flag.
It is not fair!!
by Mahvash Shahegh on Wed Apr 25, 2012 05:10 AM PDTWhat I said about Mrs. Daneshvar's family , is applicable for Dr. Khanlari's family as well. Why don't you get it? It is not a fair and legal practice!!!
Just a warning!
by Mahvash Shahegh on Tue Apr 24, 2012 04:39 PM PDTThanks for changing your avatar. Sorry! I don't mean to pick at you, but, I would like to inform you that the family of Mrs. Simin Daneshvar can sue you and the site for using this picture without their permission.
Please keep in mind that we are living in a country that the copy right is in practice unlike our mother land, Iran.
قلب حقیقت
Mahvash ShaheghTue Apr 24, 2012 11:47 AM PDT
آن چنان این عکس بقول خودتان آواتارتان مرا منقلب می کند که جائی برای توجّه به مطلب دیگری باقی نمی گذارد. آخر نمی شود با همۀ انسانها و مفاخر این چنین بازی کرد
چرا اگر نمی خواهید شناسائی شوید مثل دیگران از عکس های غیر ذیروح استفاده نمی کنید
عکس آواتار
AdibjavidThu Apr 26, 2012 01:10 AM PDT
عکس آواتار یک "نماد" است و نه بیش. نماد یا سمبل برای یاد آوری حالتی خاص از شخصیتی برجسته، مکانی قابل توجه(مثل میدان آزادی شما) یا رویدادی تاریخی است.
Beautiful poem Mr. Tavaokkol
by Anahid Hojjati on Tue Apr 24, 2012 07:38 AM PDTVery nice ending
"
پس چرا غمگين است
تماشاى نسيم
که هزاران هزار آروزى
پرپر شده گلهاى قاصدک را
در حضور خاموش ما
براى هميشه در خاک ميکشد.
"
خواهشی از آقای ادیب جاوید
Mahvash ShaheghTue Apr 24, 2012 07:33 AM PDT
آقای ادیب جاوید
لطفا از عکس استاد پرویز ناتل خانلری برای نظریّات خود استفاده نکنید. این استاد برای همۀ مردم ایران بخصوص شاگردانش بسیار محترم و خاطره بر انگیز است. به نظر من صحیح نیست که افکار خود را - گرچه همۀ آنها - پسندیده است بجای او منعکس کنید
تصویرسازی
AdibjavidWed Apr 25, 2012 09:27 AM PDT
تصویرسازی شعر در جلوه های طبیعت است و با "رنگها" آغاز می شود: تاریک، آبی، سیاه و نیز از فعل انکاری "نیست" استفاده می کند و همین بر تأثیر و تنش آن می افزاید.
در بند دوم، تصاویر حسّی سرما و گرما و سوزنده با جلوه های طبیعت در هم می آمیزد.
در بند سوم مفاهیم انتزاعی "توطئه" و "خاطره انگیز" وارد می شوند و زندگی به وزش باد تشبیه می شود.
شعر با پرسشی رندانه و در ادامۀ تصویرسازی نیرومند زندگی/باد که آرزوهای انسانی را نیز با خود می بَرد پایان می بابد و با حالت نفی و اثبات (حالت تضاد) بیان شده است (که بر زیبایی آن می افزاید) :
"پس چرا غمگين است
تماشاى نسيم
که هزاران هزار آروزى
پرپر شده گلهاى قاصدک را
در حضور خاموش ما
براى هميشه در خاک ميکشد. "
Adib
avatars are just symbols