Persian Haiku

Brian Appleton
by Brian Appleton
13-Aug-2011
 

 

 

 

 

Saa'at e rang e abi

Mah por az talast

Daryaham hast

Ama to kojaei?

 

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I can't get "so'at", maybe "saa'at".........Mah should be "por az" tala, in stead of "ba tala"........and  then, "to kojaei", instead of "to kojast"...........

Unless, it's been twisted for artistic reasons which have always been beyond me! 

Having said all the above, I'd say it's really a very nice piece, Rasoul........very good indeed...........