Pitch Black

Holleh H
by Holleh H
12-Nov-2009
 

Never ending caves

The spook of Halloween

Black roses sitting on the top of a haunted house

The depths of a lake

Closing your eyes

Horror

Just a dream

The daggers of everlasting pupils

Skulls staring at you for the rest of your life

Smoke rising from a fire below

Secrets and mysteries

The abyss of the ocean

Madness of your inner devil

It’s my own unique color

Balatarin
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Azarin Sadegh

So lovely!

by Azarin Sadegh on Fri Nov 13, 2009 12:08 PM PST

Nice and vivid nightmare: "Skulls staring at you for the rest of your life"

Such a lovely poem!

Thanks for sharing! Azarin


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Jahanshah Javid

Fabulous

by Jahanshah Javid on Fri Nov 13, 2009 11:03 AM PST

Excellent poem. You are gifted.


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persian westender

It was pretty much like my Halloween this year

by persian westender on Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:33 PM PST

Thanks for sharing.

 


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Nazy Kaviani

Welcome back!

by Nazy Kaviani on Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:33 PM PST

Thank you for writing again Holleh H.

Your poem appeals to me very much. For some reason, Halloween is my least favorite American holiday. It may have something to do with my learning about it after my childhood was over! I think the Iranian sort-of equivalent to the celebration, Charshanbeh Souri, has the same mischief associated with it, but with more joy and happiness and without the frightening part. The only thing I like to do on Halloween is to stay home and receive the neighborhood trick or treaters!

Thank you for the poem and I hope you will write again soon.


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Flying Solo

Well done

by Flying Solo on Thu Nov 12, 2009 10:20 PM PST

Clever and unique. 

"Madness of your inner devil"  I can certainly relate :) 

I liked it very much.


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