رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

Azarine Jan such a honor !

Thanks Azarine Jan,

I'm very honored, your translation is perfect. With your permission, I'll add it to Fasleh Chaharom.

Ghorbanat.

Orang

Ebi Jan about TomTom

Ebi jan, your comments are always welcomed.

For TomTom, I'll made one called "Sargardan" :-)

Orang

Orang Jaan

Chi begam? next time!

Hope one day,you write about Tom Tom!!.

Sepaas

Ebi aka Haaji

Such a little gem, Orang jan!

I loved your poem so much that I tried to twist it a bit in English..

Great sensibility! Azarin 

Our life, breakable,

Our share, to fight for,

Our silence, noisy,

The turmoil of our time, not just a myth!

Our doubts, an endless grief,

Our love, this prolonged indifference,

Our dreams, so magnificent, so colorful, 

our longing for ordinary pleasures, so simple,

Yet, our lives, breaking...   

Thanks Souri jan, it is why I prefered putting French word

Thanks Souri jan, it is why I prefered putting French word, instead of doing a bad translation

Ghorbanat.

Orang

Insouciance = Carelessness

but google translation says : Recklessness!

Looooooool!

Zendeh baad google trnaslation!

Anonymouse aziz

Thanks for reminding this nice song. It reminde a great time of "insouciance" (I don't know who tell it in English) for me.

Laleh jan

Thanks for your remark, it fit well with my purpose.

Ghorbanat

Orang

Thanks Souri Jan

If we think more about what we are doing instead of cultural automatic reaction, we would be ready for a better tomorrow.

Ghorbanat

Orang

عشق ما بیتفاوتی .... فردای ما دیدنی

I loved that one!

Some kind of sad humor! When love gives its place to indifference ...

What about tomorrow?

Great reflection Orang jon. Thanks for posting.

سکوت شکستنی

سکوتی که شکسته میشود تا فردای ما دیدنی شود...

اورنگ جان بسیار زیبا مثل شکستنی هایده

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Everything is sacred