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اورنگ
Mars 2011
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Thanks Souri jan for your answer and thanks Orang for sharing
by Anahid Hojjati on Mon Mar 07, 2011 03:33 PM PSTI have not read that much from Shamloo myself. Growinp up, I was more interested in Ebtehaj, Akhavan sales, Forough, and few others than Shamloo. Any way, it is a matter of personal preference but your answer was helpful. Thanks.
Orang jan, sorry for diversion. Thanks for sharing your poem.
Anahid
by Souri on Mon Mar 07, 2011 03:19 PM PSTTo me, Orang's poems are different style from yours.
He uses a more romatnic language, which is the essence of the poetry (in my eye) and his feelings flow from his words.
As I said before, I liked some of your poems because of the idea which was behind them (like ghabe aks, and also Arash....and some others)
But your style is mostly like writing a literary text rather than a poem.
All in all, this is a personal taste and we can not argue why we like someone's poem more than another one.
For example, I don't like Shamloo's poetry! Surprising, isn't it?
Even most of Shohrab's poems, leave me indifferent.
What can I say?
I like "shere no" but can't accept just any speech as a "sher e no". I had said the same thing to our dear Mehman, after I had read the last two poems which he has posted here. While I had always admired his style until then.
Hope this short explanation was enough for you.
Friendly;
Souri jan,
by Anahid Hojjati on Mon Mar 07, 2011 02:38 PM PSTI am kind of curious. Orang's poems are in same style as mine but you calld mine not even poems and his are always excellent. why is that?
Souri jan thanks
by Orang Gholikhani on Mon Mar 07, 2011 02:14 PM PSTYour comments are always warming my poems.
Ghorbanat
Orang
حسرت زمان را فرار کردی
SouriMon Mar 07, 2011 02:08 PM PST
Another beautiful poem, again!
Lovely !
I truly enjoyed it, Orang jon.
thanks for sharing.