رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

Thanks Manochehr jan

Ghorbanat

Orang

نه نیازیست به

نه نیازیست به رؤیا؛ نه نیازیست به خواب

جان من، حال شتابندۀ ما را در یاب

در همه حال, ره غایت خود پیماییم  

ارچه ره راست رویم, یا بچمیم چون گرداب

You are welcome Souri jan

how are you ? :-)

Happy you liked it.

Ghorbanat.

Orang

I liked your poem very much Orang

Thanks for sharing this with us.

Mehrban you are as always

Mehraban Jan, Your name is well selected. It shows your hurt , very Mehraban.

Thanks.

Orang

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A white minimalist poem.  Well done.

It is no wonder our most minimalist blogger is the first to comment on this thread.  

Ps. btw Orang jaan, I have decided that both of your suggestions for the poem of "Garma raft" are much better than the original verses but I have had a hard time editing the poem without the lines falling out of order.   

It is so nice and serene here, I feel I am disturbing it with all this verbiage. Sorry.   

مرسی از شما

نازنین خانم مرسی از شما که به کنجه ما نظر انداختید

اورنگ

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تلاشم پوچ

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  ولی بیباک

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 "فردا زیباست"