رهگذر شعر چیست / چند کلمه در باد

Friends

After 1 year and half in Iranian.com, I feel myself closer to some freinds here than people near me.

Actualy I've started this one before , one day when I was leaving my own father. Hopefully he is still healthful but you dont know what is waiting us in this world ! and after Ali's blog I felt so sad and I achieved it. A part of it is inspired by this lovely song : Mara Beboos 

//www.youtube.com/watch?v=USVfzOlBGJc&feature=related

Ghorban hamegi

Orang

Dear,,,,

Ali P.
Don’t be hard on yourself and make peace with how you feel, and some times is good to let the current take you for a while wherever it dose.
What I am trying to say is do not fight for control when you don’t have it, you’ll get tried and you bit up on yourself just not being able to achieve it.

Let the time do what supposed to do, and just be easy about it. Life is the distance between birth and death……just let your heart guide you, no matter how strong you might be. Everything will be OK.
My prayer is with your heart as well as your loved ones….

it's so touching

Whether we admit to it or not, we have bonded with each other through the cyberspace. We come here to see each other every day, we lhear each other out and even argue small points. We bond with each other in a special way from distances so far, yet we feel as close as any humans could.

Orang jan

I share the same emotions for our friend too. He's been on my mind since I found out the difficult situation he's in. I just don't have the talent to express it like you can. 

Thank you

RANdokht

Orang and Nazy

You two have so much deep feeling and express the sadness of the " Goodbye" so strongly, I am speechless. I feel sad for our dear Ali P.

I know, I know, this is life. Life will  go on,  yes it will, but without those loved one.

Thank you both for your beautiful expression.

Goodbye

I said goodbye to my home
The big house on the corner

I said goodbye to my town
And all the tears and laughter

I said goodbye to friends
Taking the memories

I said goodbye to streets
Taking the maps along

I said goodbye to kin
Promising to write

I said goodbye to my children
Relishing the pride

I said goodbye to all and thought
"I'm learning how to say goodbye"

Until I said goodbye to you
And my chest is empty
of the heart that beat for you.

Beautiful and touching

... especially knowing it's relevance to Ali P's blog. Thank you, Orang!