اولین بوسه

اولین بوسه
by Orang Gholikhani
03-Apr-2009
 

درود به یاد نمناک اولین بوسه
 

که بوی یاس شب گشا را داشت
 

دریغ از لب که گم کرد آشیانه
 

ترنم مرطوبی که دلم باز خواست
 

عابران شبح آلودمیرقصیدند شبانه
 

خسته از التماس چشم او مرا خواست
 

رعشه تار اوج میگرفت با ستاره
 

دست ناشی ابروی ماه برداشت
 

شب تاریک روز شد از شهاب هاله
 

راه شیری بسوی سرنوشت  برخاست
 

سالها گذشت از آن بوسه مستانه
 

ولی یاد عاشق جوانی را نگه داشت

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Monda & Ali Jan Merci

by Orang Gholikhani on Sun Apr 05, 2009 01:00 AM PDT

Monda Jan,

Booyeh Eshghe harcheh bashad hamisheh khosh ast. Your story reminde me Yve Montant song (a Bicyclette) //www.youtube.com/watch?v=lOZPWpiNUWQ I could find a version with subtitle. Souri could translate it for you if needed ;-)

Ali Jan,

Mahi ro har vaght az abe begiri tazeh ast :-) Go ahead,I changed the picture with Robert Doisneau famous one to give you some French example ;-)

Ghorban Hamegi

Orang


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Monda

no problem...hameh fozouleem:o)

by Monda on Sat Apr 04, 2009 10:40 PM PDT

we were riding our bikes from their house to some mutual friends' where my parents were. I like paa dari also. Do you remember what you had on that day? I do, hah!  


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Souri

Ah, okay, sorry

by Souri on Sat Apr 04, 2009 02:54 PM PDT

I didn't get it at first. Then where was it? In Abadan, but where that kissing  had happened ? Aakheh man fozoolam digeh.........


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Monda

سوری جون بذار تا توضیح بدم اخه

Monda
Sat Apr 04, 2009 02:29 PM PDT

I didn't say we were at a gas station, in Abadan you can catch that lovely scent almost anywhere!  But here unfortunately, you need to drive all the way to a gas station for almost the same effect!  


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Souri

Monda joon

by Souri on Sat Apr 04, 2009 02:08 PM PDT

آخه تو پمپ بنزین چکار میکردی عزیزم؟

جای دیگه قحط بود ؟

ولی‌ باید اعتراف کنم که منم اولین بوسه رو تو خیابون گرفتم، توی پادری یک خونه غریبه، یواشکی قایم شدیم........

یاد جوونی‌ها به خیر


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Monda

while your first is evoked by scent of exotic flowers..

by Monda on Sat Apr 04, 2009 01:11 PM PDT

mine is accessible by the scent of gasoline, as I was in Abadan at my first kiss! Not as poetic as Jasmine or Acacia but each time I am at a gas station I am reminded of the magic of that moment :o)

I love your poem Orang.


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Ali P.

I cannot wait...

by Ali P. on Sat Apr 04, 2009 06:50 AM PDT

for MY first kiss!


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Souri

Orang jaan

by Souri on Sat Apr 04, 2009 07:00 AM PDT

Thank you for the explanation.


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Orang Gholikhani

Azadeh

by Orang Gholikhani on Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:25 AM PDT

Thanks for your kind words. Spring whispread many scents and parfume in the aire. Each one will find who matches to him/her.

Ghorbanat

Orang


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Orang Gholikhani

Souri Jan

by Orang Gholikhani on Sat Apr 04, 2009 12:26 AM PDT

Thanks for taking care of my poems. Actualy nature of potery is not very "EXACT" ;-)

For this one, it is simple : Memory (souvenir) of first love keeps you young for ever even years after. If you have a poetis sprit of course.

Does it make more sens ?

Ghorbanat.

Orang


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Azadeh Azad

Ah!

by Azadeh Azad on Fri Apr 03, 2009 11:32 PM PDT

What a wonderful poem. It took me back to my own first kiss :-) While yours evokes scent of Jasmine, mine is attached to the scent of acacia (aqaaqiaa) in a delicious summer night.

Cheers,

Azadeh


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Souri

Orang jaan

by Souri on Fri Apr 03, 2009 06:45 PM PDT

Another beautiful poem. I liked it so much, it is nostagic, romantic and very innocently sensual........Just a little doubt about the last line, I didn't get it well, what you mean exactly by

ولی یاد عاشق جوانی را نگه داشت

I can't understand what it means


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