The Long-Awaited Script/Plot

by Robert

The script/plot you've all been waiting for for my upcoming movie!


Here it is!!!!!!!!!

Title: True Karate

Setting: ATUSHIMA,Okinawa, Japan 1888



1888 Okinawa, Japan, Sensei Miyazato is a 10th Dan in traditional Shotokan Karate. He started training when he was 4, and now he is 80 years old and still training the art. Sensei Miyazato owns a Shotokan Karate dojo by the river in a small town called Atushima. In which he teaches 3 times a week on Wednesdays from 7 to 8, on Fridays from 7 to 8 and Saturdays from 11:00 AM to 1:00 PM. He has 7 students, 2 of which are black belts: Shohiro purple belt, Karin green belt, Riian blue belt, Tsung black belt, Kang black belt, Uechi blue belt, Shinjo blue belt and Ryoto a green belt. On Wednesdays class they meditated, learnednew kata, excersised, jogged, and used the Makiwara. And when everyone left Ryoto asked Sensei Miyazato if it was true that the Nintsu were in town, and Sensei Miyazato opened his eyes wide withsurprise and then said it wasn’t true, although this was the first time he hadheard the news. The Nintsu were a gang of ex-karateka that would go around towncausing mischief. Their leader, Liu was an ex-student and black belt of Sensei Miyazato. After Ryoto leaves, Sensei Miyazato goes out for a stroll and trains a bit, and after a few minutes, he was attacked by a man with a black and red uniform, his face was covered with a black mask. After fighting the man, and knocking him out, Sensei Miyazato looked under the mans sleeve and he saw the Nintsu mark on his arm! Sensei Miyazato opens his eyes wide in shock.THE END OF PART 1





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Anahid Hojjati

I liked it Robert

by Anahid Hojjati on

Has suspense and action already detailed in part 1. I  think just where you write about schedule of classes, you can simplify it so the flow of story is not lost. Overall, I liked it. Thanks for sharing

Esfand Aashena

Is this a thriller?! Sounds complicated!

by Esfand Aashena on

Robert as you know we Iranians have enough complication and when we watch movies for entertainment we want easy stuff! Like comedy!  Besides didn't you way you were going to make a movie, or you're going to write the script first and then the movie?

Also, use easy names like Jack or Mark or Ali or Hassan or Hossein! 

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