EXPERIMENTAL

ok, but what about the

ok, but what about the translation?

average iranian! go get

average iranian! go get yourself a googoosh ticket.

I'm waiting...

What happened to the translation? "Your reader", can you do it? I'm waiting...

you know

Dear Sir!

People who want to call you names have issues with their sexuality, and the social and political injustice don’t mean much to them. I hope you will continue to post your great poetry on Iranian.com and elsewhere. You surly are one of a kind when it comes to contemporary literature.

Garbage

The title describes it all.
Whatever you call that, it's nothing but a combination of dirty Persian words mixed in a vague, meaningless form by a sexual pervert who is probably single and prefers to talk about his sick fantasies. What a waste of a good page.

to nannam the great....

This is a historical reality that amoung Iranians, the intellectual and people never understood each other's language and this reality has been the source of a huge gap between them. Mr. Nannam, I know this is your style to be differnt and talk and even write differently, I know you are aiming for something that the average Iranian never understands, and of cours, you are great and can not explain what that goal of yours is. But if you post your poems on an avarage Iranian's website, just expect that 99% of people don't understand you and call your poems "kossher". If you are posting your poems on such a website, at least do us a favour and ask one of your fans who fully understands your poems to translate this adult poem for us little people. We will be over joyed if just one of these ROSHANFEKRAN be able to tell us what you really mean.Thank you.

جناب آزرم: ما

جناب آزرم:

ما هفت هزار سال تمدن دارم که فقط دو هزار سال آن کشتن و شمشیر کشیدن پسر به روی پدر است. به چه افتخار می کنید؟ اعدامهای خیابانی؟ کشتار فعالان سیاسی که همیشه در تاریخ ما بوده . سعدی و حافظ زبان وقت خود بوده اند و نانام شاعر معاصر است. هر دوره زبان خود را دارد.

یکی از بهترین نوشته های شعرای نسل حاضر همین
Adult Sociology 101

است. این نوشته شماست که بوی تباهی می دهد. تباهی افتخارات پوچ و خالی از واقعیت.

به خود بیاییم

دیدم که وب لاگی به اسم سبیل طلا (!!) مطلب من در اینجا را به سخره گرفته است
//sibiltala.blogspot.com

اول بگویم که قصد من از آن مطلب توهین به نانام نبود. من به سه اصل گفتار نیک، پندار نیک و کردار نیک معتقدم و هرگز زبان به توهین نمی گشایم. در واقع مشکل من با نوشته های نانام هم در همین است که بسیار توهین آمیز اند! گویی فردی با مشکلات روانی قلم به دست گرفته و می نویسد! این همه خشم و نفرت چرا؟
صحبتی هم با خانم نازلی کامکار دارم که در وب لاگشان به حرف های من خندیده اند. خانم گرامی! ما ۷۰۰۰ هزار سال تاریخ داریم. مهد تمدن بوده ایم. بزرگانی مثل فردوسی و سعدی و خیام را به جهان عرضه کرده ایم. دریغ و درد ندارد که چنین فرهنگ کهن و استواری امروز به این درجه از تیرگی و سقوط رسیده باشد که نویسندگانش از زبان تنها رکاکت و پرخاش را بشناسند و به منطق، زیبایی، راستی و نور هیچ وقعی ننهند؟
ما می نویسیم تا جهان را بهتر کنیم. می نویسم تا بشر را بهتر کنیم. می نویسیم تا ایران را بهتر کنیم. آنچه در این راستا نباشد دروغ است و دروغ مرگ است و تباهی. به خود بیاییم
!

gadfly who! What's your name

gadfly who!

What's your name again. Aha! You "are" our beloved poet's diarrhea. The only one who really stinks is you. Naanaam is great and his poetry speaks for it self. You go digggggggg a hole wherever you are from and don't try to tell us what is good. He is a bold poet. What's your name again. aha! and you say he is not bold! To jorbozeh esme vaghito neceshtanam nadari bad darse akhalgh o adabo farhang midi. beshin sare jaat! kasi keh sher shenaseh middoneh sha'er chi migeh. sher khoob o bad dareh.

Adaamahi mesle to faghat az hasoodi kaf mikonan.

Dear nanaam or H.F.

To people who don't your masturbatory artsy political growth, your phony, pretentious crap could be exotic or like someone said here Deep!(deep in....)
But I know you well from MTL and how you always tear your ass apart just to look different is not helping anyone to connect to what you think is art.
Your "art" can't go further than the trashy work of Hagiagha.
but it amazes me to see the people of sexual complexity having so much in common when it comes to expressing themselves! You’ve mastered making people puke to your fucking sexual frustration and you think you're radical and bold. No, you’re just full of shit.
So far, after all these years, you keep coming with these products, insisting that's pure philosophical art, eh?
try harder next time, my "trying-to-be-pseudo-intellectual" friend, your brain diarrhea really stinks.

Sexy cowboy

naanaam,

You are one of the most rebelious but disgusting characters I know. To me you seem like a sexy cowboy who hasn't washed himself for months!

Hey You People!

Mr. Ghorbati,

I liked the pictures. But I was wondering if you think those koorehpaz-khune workers are watching us as "role-models" in the West! kojaay-e kaari baraadar!
A piece of writing is not meant to be understood, let alone appreciated, by everyone. I think Naanaam's are actually easy to understand, but mine may be a minority view. Anyway, the argument that his writing is not "understndable" or "acceptable" by our people, and thus it's bad or pointless is bullshit! When Nima Yushig wrote, his writings were not understndable or acceptable either. This is no argument. Smart up!

I like Naanaam's writing because it challenges us to re-think the issues. And re-thinking is precisely what we are not good at! We should be able to question the foundations of our culture and beliefs in order to change our country and ourselves. He and some others, help us to do that.

His writing is not actually that sexual. Sexuality is not the main focus of his writing. He uses it to provoke us to think. After all, show me one Iranian who is not sexual to the teeth!

Charand o Parand.......

Dooste aziz, man beh onvaaneh yek Irani keh meetavaanam betoureh yagheen begooyam Farsi zabaan maatharee maneh, nafahmeedam shoma che chizee raa meekhaahi begooee. Albatteh een raa meedaanam keh shoma yeki az tarafdaaraan Azaadee bayaan hasteed. een raa meshavad az form neveshteh shoma fahmeed. Vli haghighatan har che beshtar khaandam kamtar cheezi dastgeeram shod. man fekre mekonam behtar ast hadd aghal az een be baed neveshtehaayeh knod raa beh zabaan Farsi tarjomeh koneed taa laa aghal man e Irani kam savaad ham befahmam. Mavafagh Baasheeeeeeeed

Increase your meds!

You really need to increase your meds!

Kos Sher

We call this :KOS SHER.

So sick and pointless

ah ah ah, halam behem khord.

Well said!

Well said!

Jame'eyeh bimar

Moteasefam keh adabiat o falsafeyeh mamlekat ta cheh hadeh pasti tanazol peyda kardeh! Vaghean keh jame'eyeh biamari darim.

hazrat Naanaam va jadid

Dear Naanaam
Please contact me, I would love to talk about your new work.
babaksalari@yahoo.com
ba meher
babak

Pointless writing

Some cultures and societies are not made for certain things, Iranian culture is certainly one of them. You can not experess yourself when it comes to sex. I think it has to do with the fact that Iranian profanity and jokes are mostly genital related subjects.

It is not just Iranian culture, It is more the eastern cultures that are conservative about sex. No matter how much you try to be open with them, it does not go well. The west-living Iranians try to show off their openness which is fine in the eyes of westerners but it becomes completely nasty when it comes to explain the same thing to their Iranian friends.

We know that West-living Iranins are sort of being watched as "role-models" to many Iranians living inside of Iran a counrty that is deeply conservative to its culture but since internet is accessable everywhere they can read what we put on the web. Now you tell me how you can explain "anal bleaching" to the following Iranian people:

//khouzestan.isna.ir/mainnews.php?ID=News-176...

اشعار نانام

اشعار نانام بسیار سیاسی و اجتماعی هستند. کسی که لا به لای جرز ادعاهای سیاسی و فرهنگی و اخلاق گیر نکرده باشد این را به خوبی در اشعار او می بیند.

مرسی جناب نانام.

Baba kozaye kareem; Inam

Baba kozaye kareem;
Inam aakhare roshanfekri;
filmhaye porn ke ziad bebine
Araajeef azash biroon mizane;
hala khare biar o baaresh kon!

آتشی بود در این خانه که کاشانه بسوخت

من شاید از زیبایی شناسی چیز زیادی سر درنیاورم و حق نداشته باشم که این چیزها را زشت و کریه بنامم، اما به عنوان یک ایرانی فکر می کنم که اینگونه نوشتارها فقط و فقط به بقا رژیم آخوندی کمک می کند چرا که در تضاد کامل با ارزش های ملی و میهنی مااست. رکاکت، دفاع از پورنوگرافی، و جنسی کردن مقوله های سیاسی تنها به جمهوری اسلامی کمک می کند که به مخالفانش در خارج انگ انحراف و انحطاط بزند و مبارزه برحق آنها را زشت و بد جلوه بدهد.

شهرت و افتخار را نباید به هر قیمتی کسب کرد و نویسنده باید هر بار که قلم بر کاغذ می گذارد به امر اخلاقی و ایرانی نیز بیندیشند. من از نانام (یاهر نویسنده دیگری) انتظار نکته ارجمند و حرف نغز ندارم. اما دست کم انتظار دارم که مقوله ها و مباحث مهم و جدی را لوث نکنند.

سینه از آتش دل در غم جانانه بسوخت
آتشی بود در این خانه که کاشانه بسوخت

very deep. Enjoyed reading

very deep. Enjoyed reading it. Ignore those nadid badids and keep posting.

Great. Radical, Bold and

Great. Radical, Bold and funny as always. Bravo!

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love love love

love love love

love love love

hate hate hate

hate hate hate

hate hate hate

very nice

I liked it, beautifully said. very well done.
I enjoyed it very much, looking forward to reading more of your work.

Rooz beh rooz behtar misheh

Bah bah! rooz beh rooz keyfiateh maghalaat behtar o behtar misheh! Satheh roshd o farhang mellat ham balatar mireh. Afarin beh in roshanfekramoon, afarin beh por binandeh tarin siteh Irani! Ayandeyeh roshani dar pish darim.

Ridi Tamiz brother!

An daram mofasal.
Ba hameh band o mafsal.
Nadaram kasei.
Nadaram hoselei.
akharesh velosh karadam.
Too khodam chaposh kardam.
didi boy e atr e sho.
Rang o shekl e mah e sho.
Tamamesh eshali bood.
Sar ta paam goh mali bood....and so on