POETRY

thank you

I am humbled by all your kindness. Hope to see you all in the "garden of homeland" one day.

Great poem Roshanak jan

Beautiful poem, and I particularly liked these lines:

بهاری که در سرزمینی دور
به آسمان خیره مانده است
و شکوفه‌های صبر
در گلویش آرام
پژمرده‌ میشود.

In a spare moment....

Iretain that

everythingshines

whilean eminent

sadnessinvents

anidea, so

nostalgicand

tenderlike

aluminous care....

FrancescoSinibaldi

Smooth

This kind of poetry evokes emotions that have been silent and locked in my core for a long time - since I've been away from the beloved country.

marhaba Roshanak aziz, marhaba.

Please continue to write, as your writing helps others feel their longing as you do.

Lovely poem

Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.

Wonderful poem

Dear Roshanak,

Your poem reads so smoothly from the beginning to the end. It is also quite poignant.

And it is interesting that your reference to the Australian "red earth and dry trees," also evokes the red earth and dry trees of the Iranian deserts.

Thanks for sharing.

Cheers,

Azadeh

thank you Just to

thank you

Just to clarify, the red earth and dry trees refers to Australian desert landscape

beautiful

Simply beautiful.

Thanks

Orang