This heart

This heart
by The real Princess
30-Mar-2009
 

It aches from within

It pounds with every breath

Its waves pound the shores

The Ocean gods are mad
 

Heart that’s clear as water

Filtered through sands of life

Open to be hit any moment

Can not be otherwise
 

Who is there inside

Don’t disguise and dare

light can wipe the darkness

Let in the one who cares
 

A heart that’s  old

This heart may be scratched

Its rare to see one’s heart

Mine shaped like mirrored glass
 

It hurts and aches with pain

It throbs with every pulse

In search of inner core

To see if that heart loves

29-March-2009
 

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A real poem

by prince in exile (not verified) on Wed Apr 01, 2009 07:18 PM PDT

Simply elegant. I loved the sincereity and the honesty of this poem. Although it shows the strength, it also shows tenderness. A being, having the complete package. Definately the real one.


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The real Princess

Thank you

by The real Princess on Wed Apr 01, 2009 11:16 AM PDT

Thank you Divinity, and thank all of you very kindly for your commments.

This was my first post  on this site, and I am glad it was worthy of your attention.

Soheyla Marzvaan

AKA; The real Princess


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The real Princess

Let in the fresh breez, inhale and come alive

by The real Princess on Wed Apr 01, 2009 11:11 AM PDT

Dear Poet, Farhad Z:

Being familar with your work, I can only wish that you too have, or are on your way to reach your miracle as life without it has no meaning.

Receiving praise from a Grand poet such as yourself means a lot . Hopefully, I will inspire you, and be worthy of them someday.

the real princess

 


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Dance

by Dancer (not verified) on Wed Apr 01, 2009 11:06 AM PDT

Dear Sohayla
I hope when the time comes to sit or to dance, you get up and dance...


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The real Princess

Because of you

by The real Princess on Wed Apr 01, 2009 10:55 AM PDT

Dear Jahanshah,

Thank you for your support and providing a venue for all of us to connect on a personal level. I am glad you liked my poem.

Soheyla


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The real Princess

to dance or not to dance

by The real Princess on Wed Apr 01, 2009 10:53 AM PDT

 

Dear Dancer,

The risks are many and so are the trophies. Your advice is for those with courage.Thank you for sharing your thoughts.

Soheyla


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Divinity

by FarhadZ. (not verified) on Tue Mar 31, 2009 10:24 PM PDT

Thank you for your comments on other comments.


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Divinity

Bravo

by Divinity on Tue Mar 31, 2009 09:37 PM PDT

Your poem so simple yet elegant described the plight of many; What others have commented also beautiful, and meaningfful , I can not add more. Please introduce us with more of your pieces. I enjoyed this one immensly.   Divinity 

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by FarhadZ. (not verified) on Tue Mar 31, 2009 07:05 PM PDT

I read your poem one more time. I am sure it is just a beautiful poem and nothing more. But, if there is any hint of reality in it, the depicted pain, exists, however small or big, you should not shy away from but rather welcome and embrace it.

There is jewel in pain's many layers.

Naiive souls either distract themselves with whatever means available or just fall onto its helpless cycle of ego feeding.

Pain allows growth, expansion, detoxification and capacity for joy. Use it as a tool. Add solitude as a companion to pain and miracles will happen.

Pain is a gift from God/Universe so that true happiness and joy can have their rightful spots in life.


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Learn to dance though it!

by Dancer (not verified) on Tue Mar 31, 2009 11:15 AM PDT

Beautiful and stronge images to point the dilemma of opening the heart or not! without opening the heart, you never know if the feelings are true, by opening your heart "specially when it is shaped as mirrored glass which filterd through sands" you are vulnerable to pain and scratch!
I have not figured out a rule for that, but I know I don't want to miss the experience and i would be fine if I learn to dance through it.


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A beautiful poem

by FarhadZ. (not verified) on Mon Mar 30, 2009 01:17 PM PDT

My your heart, or anybody's heart, always be blessed with expansion, beyond the "whatever" pain. Pen more verses, it has amazing effects.


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Jahanshah Javid

Waves

by Jahanshah Javid on Mon Mar 30, 2009 09:42 AM PDT

Incredibly beautiful.


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