Anahid Hojjati

اگر این شعر ترانه بود

If ever music is intended to go along with this poem, this is taraneh version of it:

ز دل پرسیدم  امروز
شکستی ؟ شکستی ؟
جوابم داد دل
صدایی صدایی شنیدی ؟

بگفتم , بگفتم
سوختی دل؟
بگفتا
مگر تو آتش بدیدی؟

سپس گفتم: پریشانی
پریشانی تو ای دل ؟
بگفتا پریشانی در جوانی ست
من چه سین ها
چه سین ها در غربت
سالها هفت کردم

بگفتم دلا دل
کجا گم گشته ای  تو ؟
نشانم داد دل راهی

در آخر بگفتم:
دل  ای دل
تو گویا از آهن هستی
بگفتا
دل شاعر نه از آهن
دلی همواره در سوگ باشد

thanks Soosan jan for your answer. I have a taraneh version now

I just came up with Taraneh version of this poem . For Taraneh, it will be a bit different but the meaning and most of the poem will stay intact, just some "paas and peesh kardan" of words and some repetitions of phrases will be required to make it into a taraneh.  

I am refering to your reply

asking me upload some pictures once I am at national mall for cherry festival event .......

do not worry at least you have  a quarter ....... I do not even have one  : )

Soosan Khanoom, Hala age momkeneh

yek meghdar toozeeh bedahaeed, my quarter is not working.

Hey Anahid

I may as well do that ......... I am a good photographer : )

Dear MM and Vildemose jan, thanks for words of encouragement

Dear friends, Thanks for reading my poem and also for taking the time to write comments. Spring is fast approaching and it is a great time to talk about "del".

Dear Ostaad Noury, thanks for your blog.

Thanks Ostaad Saadat Noury for the link to your blog. I read all the poems but I will reread them to learn from these great poets.

Anahid jan: Khaili ghashang

Anahid jan: Khaili ghashang gofti halo zare dele akasremoono toyeh ghorbat. Thank you

Thanks Anahid - very nice & heart warming at this time of yr

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Thanks Souri for reading my poem

And also for your comment. I am glad you liked it.

Thoughtful

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Very nice poem, Anahid

Congratulation!

This is a very heartfelt poem. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Dear Red Wine, if you feel ...

like crying, you should be able to do that. No matter whether one is male or female. From your blogs and comments, "tabeate hassase shoma maalom aast", and you would want that in an artist. Thanks for reading my poem and commenting and many thanks for your reports about Japan.

Orang jan, thanks for your comment

Dear Orang, thanks for visiting my blog.

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آناهید جان،شعر قشنگی‌ سرودید...

 بیچاره دلهای ما، دل‌ من و دل‌ شما،یکی‌ از دلتنگی‌ و آن یکی‌ از دوری سوخت و ساخت...این روزها آدم چه راحت گریه‌اش می‌گیرد... آن وقت می‌گویند :‌ای بابا، مرد که گریه نمیکند،مرد که خم به آبرو نمیاورد !‌ای وای.. انگاری مردها دل‌ ندارند :(

با سپاس .

Thanks Soosan Khanoom for reading my poem.

I am glad you liked it. One version of this poem had mention of blossoms and I just read Orang's poem which talks about blossoms.  I also read that you will be in DC for cherry blossom event. That should be some so beautiful.  Please, take some pictures and share it on IC.

nice poem

Thanks Anahid jan

Orang

I love it ...... this is so

I love it ...... this is so beautiful Anahid jan