Anahid Hojjati

Faramarz, I was reading your comment again ...

and I got confused, you wrote:

اینهم برداشت من از شعر قشنگ تو و جوابی از ماریا به آرنولد!

how did you get to your poem from my poem? I mean how did you get your "bardasht"?  

To MM, and also to Divaneh

Dear MM, although not inspired by "Criminal Minds", but I am a fan of the show.  When I wrote this poem, "Criminal Minds was" not in my mind. However, I do watch some episodes of the show, even though some episodes are quite disturbing. Actullaly, they are all disturbing but some really test the limit of my tolerance for seeing crime on TV. I am not surprised that you were reminded of an episode of that show since they are all about killing and many involve killing women whom the criminals supposedly love. Thanks for reading my poem and commenting.

Dear Divaneh, speaking of disturbing, you commented that this poem was a little bit disturbing, and I agree.  It was by design since it talks about a disturbing truth that happened and even if I am using metaphor but it did really happen and it was very disturbing.

Faramarz jan, nice poem and how true

I have to say many were surprised when they saw picture of the lady who had Arnold's baby. I heard some guys comment that he should have cheated at least with someone more attractive. But I believe this happens quite often. I remember other instances that I read about powerful married men having affairs with some women and in several of them, wife was more beautiful than the woman that they had affair with. Thanks for reading and also writing a poem.

Anahid

Anahid,

I think it was an episode of "Criminal Minds" TV program that centered around a man who killed young women and then seeked his love as if nothing had happened.  I read your poem a couple of times and it sure reminded me of that episode. 

A little scary, but beautiful rhyme on a unique love story, I think!

Thanks.

جوابی از ماریا به آرنولد!

مرسی آناهید،
اینهم برداشت من از شعر قشنگ تو و جوابی از ماریا به آرنولد!

چنین گفت به آرنولد خیانت کار ماریا

که دگر دستت  نرسد به این گل پری ها

یادته که حال میکردی با من تو بیکینی

هر شب میخ میشدی به اینها آنچنونی

در نگاهت عشق نبود فقط شهوت بود

پدرم گفت که کارت بی مروت بود

ولی تقصیر ز من بود که گردن کلفت میخواستم

یک مرد ستبر و چیز کلفت میخواستم

ولی آن کلفت گواتمالایی دزدید تورا از من

نهاد درشت اندام  پسری مثل تو در دامن

Thanks for the explanation Anahid

It made it even more outstanding. A very strong metaphor and very true too.

Wow Divaneh jan, your interpretation is strong

Very powerful where you write about a woman killing her own soul every time. In this poem, the old woman is a metaphor for eslahtalaban who have stayed with Rahbariat of IRI even when youth have been raped, bloodied and killed.

However, your interpretation about killing her own soul is a good one. In some ways I like it as much as my own intent for writing this poem. Thanks for showing me another way to look at this poem.

Nice poem

Dear Anahid, this is a very nice poem but a little disturbing too. Is it in relation to some killers, or is it the same woman who kills her own soul every time? 

Shirin jan, thanks for reading.

Thanks Shirin jan for reading and commenting.

نمیدونم غصه بخورم یا حرص

خیلی زیبا بود اما رابطه شعر و عکس اون دو جانور را نفهمیدم

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