Anahid Hojjati

for some reason I could not make edits

 In the poem. No Edit button. I just wanted to change it to read as below:

رخصت پهلوون
حالا نرو ,
 امشب رو بمون
چای دارم میدمت
گندمِ ما چاکرت سبزِت

آمدی جامه نو کردم
 کهنه ست کیف و کفشم
اما قدمت رویِ پا , رویِ چشمم

سماموس را بوسیدی میدانم
سلام داده جویِ پشتی
شب است اکنون , کجا میروی ؟
بسترت پشتِ بام پهن است

 رخصت پهلوون
جونِ ما , جونِ گندم جونِ چای
 امشب رو اینجا بمون

Dear MM,

As a kid, once in while sleeping on rooftop while visiting grandparents was fun and adventure, keywords being once in a while :).

Anahid jaan

I also miss the open roof sleeping.  Still, bless air conditioning and modern. Ed's.  

Nice poem. 

Great JD

It seems like such a lovely place. I have been to Gilan but don't remember Roodsar.

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من خاطرات بسیار زیبایی از یک تابستان و اقامت در واجارگاه و دیدار های مکرر از رودسر و کلارچای و مزارع زیبای چای دارم.  مربوط است به دوران دبستان

Faramarz,

In this poem, metaphors are used. It could be read two ways. Some woman in north of Iran talking to a lover or it is a song of rain. Asking rain to stay. Hence

چای دارم میدمت
گندمِ ما هم چاکرت سبزِت

or

اما قدمت
 هم رویِ پا ,
 هم رویِ چشمم

when poem mentions

پشتِ بام بسترت پهن است

it is a reference to rain having a wide space for it to fall on a rooftop. There is nothing wrong with making it romantic. However, if it were me, I probably would say:

"meekhay bemoon, meekhay namoon," .

Love on Posht-e-Boom

Nice peom Anahid.

Looks like you are getting ready for Valentine.

But remember that the superheroes are always in a rush!

Thanks JD for reading my poem

Here is a link:

//en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rudsar 

 about city of "Roodsar", and here are few lines from the link:

"

Rudsar (Persian: رودسر, also known as, Rūdsar and Rūd-i-Sar)[1] is a city in and the capital of Rudsar County, Gilan Province, Iran. At the 2006 census, its population was 33,321, in 9,741 families.[2]

Enjoying a moderate and humid climate, Rudsar is located in a verdant plain 326 kilometres (203 mi) from Tehran and to the south of the Caspian Sea. ...

The word "Rudsar" comes from the word Rud, the Persian word for river, and sar, the Persian word for head, since Rudsar has rivers running along each side of the city.

Rudsar is situated on the coastal areas of the Caspian sea, the economy of this city is based on fishing and agriculture. The major products of Roudsar are rice, tea, citrus fruits, and silk..."

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آناهید خانم

از تجسم شب تابستان و رختخواب پهن بروی پشت بام خیلی لذت بردم.  سپاس