"نویسنده ناشناس"
من به مدرسه ميرفتم تا درس بخوانم
تو به مدرسه ميرفتي به تو گفته بودند بايد دکتر شوي
او هم به مدرسه ميرفت اما نمي دانست چرا
من پول تو جيبي ام را هفتگي از پدرم ميگرفتم
معلم گفته بود انشا بنويسيد
من نوشته بودم علم بهتر است
معلم آن روز او را تنبيه کرد
من در خانه اي بزرگ مي شدم که بهار
سال هاي آخر دبيرستان بود
من بايد بيشتر درس مي خواندم دنبال کلاس هاي تقويتي بودم
روزنا مه چاپ شده بود
من رفتم روزنامه بخرم که اسمم را در صفحه ي قبولي هاي کنکور جستجو کنم
من آن روز خوشحال تر از آن بودم
چند سال گذشت
من منتظر گرفتن مدارک دانشگاهي ام بودم
وقت قضاوت بود
من خوشحال بودم که که مرا تحسين مي کنند
زندگي ادامه دارد
من موفقم من ميگويم نتيجه ي تلاش خودم است!!!
من , تو , او
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Dear Souri
by mostafa ghanbari on Mon Aug 23, 2010 07:59 PM PDTmg
We have been going the wrong way for thirty years and it simply means we have been ignorant as no wise and realistic society goes the wrong way for so long. So, we have to accept our failures otherwise we will lose more things.
Dear Mostafa
by Souri on Mon Aug 23, 2010 09:15 AM PDTWise comment!
So bitter and penetrating
by mostafa ghanbari on Sun Aug 22, 2010 07:34 PM PDTmg
HI
من ، تو، او
هیچگاه در کنار هم نبودیم ، هیچگاه یکدیگر را نشناختیم"
Dear khar
I enjoyed this blog very much; but what made my enjoyment doubled was the noticeable changes in your attitudes towards our social problems in Iran.
In a few occasions I have had a bit of communication with you and I found you a very bright guy with some remarkable potentials in observing and expressing; but honestly I thought I would not be able to have any constructive communication with you as I felt some sort of fanatical approches in your mind towards our self-created problems in Iran. But now after reading some of your recent blogs I am very happy to see you more realistic and closer to the hidden and really destructive social flaws and failures which have already fettered us in different ways.
In order to get out of all those messes we have to release ourselves by the way of revealing our failures and exposing ourselvse to the light of truth and realities which have been lost in our distorted insights.
Yes, you are right ,we have never been together; we have never known each other. And it means there are somethings badly wrong.
Back to the interpretetion of this poem:
by yousef on Sun Aug 22, 2010 07:45 AM PDTRegardless of who wrote it, and what his/her point was, this is my interpretetion, based on my own experience of life in Iran and west:
We are all born the same. At birth, we are all like an unwritten blank sheet of paper. But depending on which social class we are born in, the life would offer us different opportunities. Based on those opportunities, in an extreme case, some of us end up getting good education, and jobs. Others end up with no education, get involved in crime and worse. This is why I aspire for a classless society as optimum solution to social ills, and social justice and democracy as a minimum requirement for a civil society I'd like to see in our country Iran one day.
Thanks Again Khar for posting.
voting patterns...
by Q on Sun Aug 22, 2010 03:00 AM PDTlet's take a wild guess which one of the three voted for Ahmadinejad, which for Mousavi and which is a Monarchist.
Just brilliant!
by Ari Siletz on Sun Aug 22, 2010 02:38 AM PDTگاهي نمي شود بي ثروت از علم چيزي نوشت
Anahid Jaan
by Khar on Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:42 PM PDTas you said, indeed we are fortunate to have the opportunities that we have had in Life.
NB Jaan you are very correct
by Khar on Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:39 PM PDTWe all are product of our surroundings and the society, product of the opportunities that were given or taken away (or never given) to us in life, especially at the early stages in life.
Khar Jan
by bajenaghe naghi on Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:07 PM PDTThis was a beautiful and poignant piece. It brought tears to my eyes and pain to my heart. It is easy to say our world and life are the result of our own choices and actions. This may be true for some, but not all.
thanks khar, this blog is so true
by Anahid Hojjati on Sat Aug 21, 2010 07:21 PM PDTDear khar, thanks for reminding us all that most of us (At least most of those in US) have been fortunate to have been born in families who have provided for us nicely growing up.
It's really good. But we
by benross on Sat Aug 21, 2010 06:31 PM PDTIt's really good. But we should be wary of the fine line between upper class romanticism and true lovers.
Mr. Faramarz
by Khar on Sat Aug 21, 2010 04:14 PM PDTThanks to you the "unknown" poet! ;-)
Now let's go back to the point of this blog...
by Khar on Sat Aug 21, 2010 08:15 PM PDTIn my view no one is born with a pre determined path in life. This story brings out and points so eloquently to the fact that we all are born the same. What makes the difference is the opportunities we been given throughout our lives especially in the early age or lack there of. More closed and undemocratic the society, there will be less opportunity for all especially the less fortunate among us. These opportunities must be economics, social, personal & educational in nature, and we all are involved in this task from all level of soical standings. What do you think?
"I claim that human mind or human society is not divided into watertight compartments called social, political and religious. All act and react upon one another."
-Mohandas Gandhi
"The principle that human nature, in its psychological aspects, is nothing more than a product of history and given social relations removes all barriers to coercion and manipulation by the powerful."
-Noam Chomsky
ما، شما، ایشان
FaramarzSat Aug 21, 2010 02:23 PM PDT
A Personal Story
از شاعر ناشناس فرامرز
با کیف و کتاب و قابلمه
رفتیم به سوی مدرسه
مادرخوب و مهربان
همش به فکر این و آن
از سر صبح گرگ و میش
بدون فکر به حال خویش
درست میکرد غذای گرم
میخوردیم ما بی قید و شرم
طبقه اول عدس پلو با خرما
طبقه دوم پیراشکی ومربا
خیار و سیب و گیلاس
قایم میشد تو لباس
فراشه نگاه میکرد به قابلمه
میخواست یک لقمه از همه
کوفتش بشه اون سگ پدر
دزدید غذای اهل شهر
Thanks Jahanshah jaan!!
by Khar on Sat Aug 21, 2010 02:05 PM PDTWill do.
Thanks Khar
by Jahanshah Javid on Sat Aug 21, 2010 01:38 PM PDTWhen there's no mention of another author I will usually assume that's it's written by the blogger.
If you don't know the author, just say at the top or bottom author unknown.
Thanks. I'll feature it.
Ey baba ....chi shod agha?!!!!
by Souri on Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:40 PM PDTI didn't mean anything bad !
That came as a big surprise to see your harsh comment.
I was just wondering if we don't have a friend (in DC area) in common.
That was all.
What's all the fuss baba jon?
I will delete my comment now, no worry!
President e Mahboob !!
by ebi amirhosseini on Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:23 AM PDTHumbling & wise comments!!
Sepaas
Ebi aka Haaji
Doostan Azizam,
by Khar on Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:49 PM PDTTo all of you who have left comments regarding the content of this blog please note, this blog is not written by me but I thought you would enjoy reading it as much as I did .
I Thank you and I'm sure the unknown author thanks you!
Souri
by Khar on Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:15 AM PDTDo you really think its all about you? sorry I have a bit of a news for you its not !! besides being paranoid is not good and it makes you age faster. I have other friends outside of IC circle of friends sending me emails as well, I’m very sure none of them know you and why should they. Plus the internet is way bigger than you and I, it is not limited to yours or my email distribution list.
The "unbelievable" is how self-conceited you are!
Jahanshah jaan, would you please remove this blog? My intent was to post a good read, but since it’s a point of contention for Souri Khanoom and since she received the same thing in an email. :-)
Jahanshah Aziz,
by Khar on Sat Aug 21, 2010 09:36 AM PDTSource is unkown I received it on an email. Never the less its a good reading, sorry for not indicating that when I posted. It was late when I posted it I was on my way to bed.
added the words "unkown writer" on the top of the blog.
.
by Souri on Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:41 PM PDT.
Source?
by Jahanshah Javid on Sat Aug 21, 2010 03:41 AM PDTSource?
Khar khan
by Fatollah on Sat Aug 21, 2010 02:56 AM PDTto be reminded of the injustice, especially the kind childeren have to endure, you made me think and to remember the lost details.
Great read and thank you
Very Powerful indeed.
by Maryam Hojjat on Sat Aug 21, 2010 02:22 AM PDTMay we all make an IRAN in future where no child be left behind.
wonderful, and touching,
by yousef on Sat Aug 21, 2010 12:18 AM PDTThis reminds me of Abbas, a class mate I had back in Iran who'd often miss school and get punished by Nazeme bi rahm. I knew he had to help his dad who was a banna, because the father was quite old and often sick. we were only eight, perhaps nine. I often think about Abbas and where he is these days....
President e Mahboob !!
by ebi amirhosseini on Fri Aug 20, 2010 11:30 PM PDTSepaas
Ebi aka Haaji
thank you Khar
by Masoud Kazemzadeh on Fri Aug 20, 2010 11:27 PM PDTKhar jaan,
Thanks. Powerful story.
Masoud
Beautiful
by Majid on Fri Aug 20, 2010 10:47 PM PDTAnd.............thank you.