Spider's Web

lelakoopal
by lelakoopal
26-May-2008
 

Here's a poem I wrote for my English class, it's terrible but whatever, people need to get their writing out there. :)

 

Spider's Web

 

So intricately woven

It delicately stands,

Surpassing all the seasons,

It's a beauty of the lands;

And some lovely spider searching for a place to make it's web

Finds this spot of shade, among the flow and ebb.

This sight we awe and marvel at,

It sparkles and it gleams;

For the spider that we know and love

Chose his abode to be a stream.

 

It withstands the wind that blows

With it's strands so small and fine,

And twinkles on the Milky Way,

Continuous as stars that shine.

Balatarin
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by Setiz (not verified) on Wed May 28, 2008 07:30 PM PDT

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by Natalia Alvarado-Alvarez on Mon May 26, 2008 07:49 PM PDT

I think that it is lovely. You are correct the more we practice our craft, the better we become at it. :o)

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