I came home late night. Tired> noticing a message on the phone’s answering machine> It’d been long that I hadn’t a message on my>>Phone. So, rushed to >>check:
Surprising/unusual/unprecedented/ message > ...of an unknown person: Unrecognizable words of >>? >Most likely a women reciting/murmuring/mumbling?/crying??/seeking help???/ checke..d for the calller>?? info.....;”NO AVAILABLE NAME AND NO.”
>Could be .....a wrong/prank ....call///???? Something..thing in ??>>her voice>>.Sou.nding....>> familiar!!!!
Curiosity >> listening over > and over>..over and over>> background noise of her talks> excruciating>.>
As if ..>(she’sbeen) caught up in the storm...The wind was blowing (wheeeeeeshhhh) in your ..>>ear...>>
Becoming obsession,>> >finding some.....[ words]after all >>>>>hardly recognizable: [....] & [....]
I, ......Obsessed/puzzled<<<<<Her voice:/Haunting
Who >could... she be???be? she? Who? What???Going...Going thru the words:[....]????Ohhhhhh
I,.....Un//known fear””””””””** Heart ‘pounding””””’**>>.Sweating>>>fear //>>>comin..g// over>>.Listening .over>.>>a.nd over ........nonethelesssssss...sssssssss.
Its >>>>midni.ght.>>>.... Exha>>.usting,...anex./;,.h...a...usti..g..>>>>> nig>ht.
Bu>>.T:
I f>>ou?n,...>>d..w/h>o .................. s,h....>>>>e w<>>>>>>a......////////s............................................................................................BiP.BiP.BiP
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persian westender, you are so so naughty!
by ComraidsConcubine on Fri Mar 25, 2011 11:03 AM PDTThat other film of his is just sort of neurotic bizarre! And damnit damnit ;) I'm sure other references will only occur to me much later. Well, actually , I look forward to my late smirking.
AND that was brilliant brilliant! You ought to get your own proper site or blog or something for us all to marvel at those ....
merci le jury pour une telle médaille structuré
by persian westender on Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:29 AM PDTThus spoke Mayakowky,
With a Pride in his voice,
Reflection of platinum in his profuse neck:
"..Thou shall experiment,
as I did,
…until you die
… and it is my command
until their discrete charm …
will fall apart...”
"and one more thing:
Bourgeoisie sucks!"
Congrats objet du désir
by ComraidsConcubine on Fri Mar 25, 2011 04:08 AM PDTto the only structured, "experimental" poet on this site with a clear sense of sound, shape,sense and senses! *
Still reading yours on the futurist Russian one...:)
*Platinum medal to you for using "mechanical" language with "traditional" "elements" of everyday into a juxtaposed wonderland of a seemingly unknown, random "objet du désir".... And many other reasons...Jamh (sorry, 'can't remember the exact username) gets bronze.
Explanation
by persian westender on Thu Mar 24, 2011 02:21 PM PDTThe text is formatted this way on purpose. As it becomes clearer to me (protagonist) that what’s going on regarding the message(content), the text becomes more disintegrated and fragmented to the readers (form); making it a paradox of content and form.... and making it impossible to figure out what’s going on, just in the time of clarification.
Just an experimental plot! Merci for the interest MPD.
It's all very interesting, but could you please explain
by Multiple Personality Disorder on Thu Mar 24, 2011 12:53 PM PDTI didn't get it, what's up with the way the text is formated. It's very original and I am sure there is a good reason for it, but please explain.
Comments
by persian westender on Thu Mar 24, 2011 08:06 AM PDT-Thank you Anahid!
- Sosan khaanoom: pick whichever you like for the ending.:-)
So who was she ? .............
by Soosan Khanoom on Thu Mar 24, 2011 03:31 AM PDTSo who was she ?
an old lover ? .......
or a destiny .. an accident .... a new beginning ?
Very nice dear PW.
by Anahid Hojjati on Wed Mar 23, 2011 09:09 PM PDTthanks for sharing.