دشنه خائن

دشنه خائن
by Orang Gholikhani
22-Jan-2008
 

 

 

دشنه از غیب آمد
از قرونی تاریک و اندوه

دشنه صورت نداشت
بی هویت مثل صدها دژخیم خون آلود

دشنه مبهم بود
مثل یک زخم قدیمی غم آلود

دشنه خائن از خود ما بود
خود را برادر میگفت با صداقت ظاهری جفاکار

دشنه هوا را بلعید
زمان ایستاد عقربه خم شد

دشنه گردن حقیقت را از پشت برید
شجاعت برخورد نگاه را نداشت

فریاد زنید ای شبزندکان غمگین
خورشید ما تحمل خیانت را نداشت

انروز بخت یار ما نبود
سنگر دوباره خالی شده بود

دشنه پایان نبود
نه کوچه ای خرابه نه رودی ساکن


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Code: 151

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Thanks Abol Danesh!

by Orang Gholikhani on Fri Jan 25, 2008 08:56 AM PST

What do you mean by "occident?"


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Orient, Orients, Oriented, Orientation, Oriedental

by Abol Danesh (not verified) on Thu Jan 24, 2008 09:07 AM PST

I consider this poem to be of superb quality in its theme and its orientation a sort of role model to follow. Reason? Very simply! the poet despite all the zigzag and maneuvering with his well chosen metaphores and abstracted analongizing does not cleverly attach negative and demeaning motif to personify the action. And therefore in keeping it straightforwardly crystal clean without any personification-pollution which is often targeted artfully for character assasination, the poet make a significant artistic contribution to society by enlarging the educational horizon of society in which everyone breathes and participates.

Grade: A-

Occident?


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