TITAN

TITAN
by Latina
11-Jun-2012
 

If I am water

I am all the oceans

 

If I am water

I am all the seas

 

If I am water

I am all the rain

 

For if I was water

That is what it would take to make me

 

 

 

Note:  I would like to thank Arman my son for his permission to post his poem on this web site. Thank you for reading his poem and for any constructive feedback. :o)

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yolanda

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by yolanda on

Hi Natalia,

   Wow! Poetry writing tradition runs in your family! Awesome!


Latina

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by Latina on

Yolanda,

 

Thank you.  May be one day, I will get to post a poem written by my brother too. :o)


yolanda

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by yolanda on

He inherited your poetry writing genes!

Thank you for sharing!


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Raton

by Latina on

Glad you liked the poem.

When I read Arman's poem, I think "He certainly has a very good self esteem."  I must have done something right. :o)


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by Esfand Aashena on

Natalie that's a nice poem.  I think it can be an opera like song.  Perhaps give it to Josh Groban to turn it into a song. 

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water, so calming

by Latina on

I find it very interesting that both of my sons have such an interest in water.

 

 Julio's poem Water, so calming