Manoucher Avaznia

Solid!

Good work. Keep it up. I enjoyed it.

Yours,

Ali P.

من نگهبان چنین زندانم

خاک این مقبره دندانگیر است.

خاطراتش زیباست

هر دو پایم دربند.

ذهن من در گرو چند و چنان و چون است.

Beautifully said Manoucher jan. Thank you!

Zendan-baan

We're all our own prison guards... but most of us can't express how it feels as beautifully as you did.

Thank you

So true!

Thank you and keep posting your nice thought for us, please.

I appreciate this

Souri Jaan;

Thank you for your charging words.  See it in the context of electricity, not law.  I beleive everyone is an assigned gaurd to a thought.  And so is for me:

"Delam Tang Aamadast Emshab Braay'e Yaadegaar's Seelee'ye Sard'e Zemestaanee". 

Picture of my life !

Besiar ziba. I try to hold myself from sending encouraging comment each time you post a beautiful poem, as I know it may become boring for you to thanks us all the time !! But had to express my feeling about this one absolutely :  It's like a poetic picture of my life here in Canada..every year I say : I should leave.....

Thank You

Thanks J.J.  I never forget your contribution to these poems.  Years passed and I tried to publish them in few periodical before discovering your wide open mind and your site's opportunity.  Check the dates on some of them.  They speak for themselves.  You and your site deserve to be the first ones to receive anything new coming out of my pen.

Sepaas

Beautiful

You weave words so beautifully and meaningfully.